A group of people think that enjoyable hobbies are activities that are considered as difficult and challenging. Although some people agree with the statement, but I personally disagree with it, since everyone has his own interest.
On the one hand, several people believe that enjoyable hobbies need to be difficult and complicated. Sophisticated and challenging hobbies such as mountain climbing, bungee jumping or water rafting are considered as high risk and trigger the adrenalin. To conquer those hobbies, people need to be in a healthy condition and require them to master some sophisticated techniques. And when people could conquer these activities, they would be satisfied with the accomplishment and achievement. As for simple hobbies such as walking or reading, they believe that these activities are less challenging and boring, since everybody could do those activities, and they do not require any kind of expertise or breathtaking.
On the other hand, it is undeniable that people have different interest, passion and hobby. For certain people, easy hobbies such as stamp collecting or jogging might be considered as boring, but others feel that these activities are fun and satisfying. Some people are satisfied and proud of their unique and diverse stamp collection, while others enjoy walking as it helps them in maintaining their health. Therefore, people could not rank different hobbies based on the difficulty level of the activity.
In conclusion, it is true that some hobbies are difficult but others are easy, and everyone has different hobbies. I personally feel that hobbies do not need to be difficult to be enjoyable but they should be in accordance with a person's interest.
A group of
people
think
that enjoyable
hobbies
are
activities
that
are considered
as
difficult
and challenging. Although
some
people
agree
with the statement,
but
I
personally
disagree with it, since everyone has his
own
interest.
On the one hand, several
people
believe that enjoyable
hobbies
need to be
difficult
and complicated. Sophisticated and challenging
hobbies
such as mountain climbing, bungee jumping or water rafting
are considered
as high
risk
and trigger the adrenalin. To conquer those
hobbies
,
people
need to be in a healthy condition and require them to master
some
sophisticated techniques. And when
people
could conquer these
activities
, they would
be satisfied
with the accomplishment and achievement. As for simple
hobbies
such as walking or reading, they believe that these
activities
are less challenging and boring, since everybody could do those
activities
, and they do not require any kind of expertise or breathtaking.
On the
other
hand, it is undeniable that
people
have
different
interest, passion and
hobby
. For certain
people
, easy
hobbies
such as stamp collecting or jogging might
be considered
as boring,
but
others feel that these
activities
are fun and satisfying.
Some
people
are satisfied
and proud of their unique and diverse stamp collection, while others enjoy walking as it
helps
them in maintaining their health.
Therefore
,
people
could not rank
different
hobbies
based on the difficulty level of the activity.
In conclusion
, it is true that
some
hobbies
are
difficult
but
others are easy, and everyone has
different
hobbies
. I
personally
feel that
hobbies
do not need to be
difficult
to be enjoyable
but
they should be in accordance with a person's interest.
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30Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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