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Some people believe that exercising in the morning is best. On the other hand, other people say that exercising in the evening is more beneficial. Which do opinion do you agree with and why v.1

Some people believe that exercising in the morning is best. On the other hand, other people say that exercising in the evening is more beneficial. Which do opinion do you agree with and why v. 1
By the beginning of 2020 and the world is facing numerous issues that lead anxiety spreading among countries. One of these examples is corona virus outbreaks. Corona virus makes the factories shutting down, which affect the recession negatively, moreover people are panicking. Many evidences mention that carnivorous came from bats in china, furthermore corona virus can kill people if severe symptoms are shown and this pandemic keeps spreading. And it seems that the rush period of the virus will remain for a long time. Which force countries take strict actions to prevent the corona virus. They set resolutions to overcome this obstacle. They impose curfew, shut down schools and universities and close entertainment places which means less activities are happening in the country. For example, if the curfew imposed the vehicles will not move which means there is no need for the fossil fuels. However, countries such as the United Arab Emirates and Saudi Arabia export grease to America in result of excess amount of coat they have, thereby the coat costs is remarkable decreasing and it is cheaper than the one bottle of water because nobody buys oil. Countries are concerned because the economy reaches rock bottom. If recession decays the country will go bankrupt and people will not take their salary. A lot of countries tackled this problem with wise resolutions. They do distance working and learning instead of stopping the work because if the education stops the recession will never develop. With this solution people can continue their work without any barriers. Additionally, existing of online shopping can stimulate the buy and sell method among people. The economy is an essential factor for the country to prosper. Corona virus pandemic are affecting the economy and countries are nervous about losing their funds. Thus, force the countries impose distance learning and working to ease the issue.
By the beginning of 2020 and the world is facing numerous issues that lead anxiety spreading among
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countries
. One of these examples is corona
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virus
outbreaks. Corona
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virus
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makes
the factories shutting down, which affect the recession
negatively
,
moreover
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people
are panicking.

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Many
evidences mention that carnivorous came from bats in
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china
,
furthermore
corona
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virus
can kill
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people
if severe symptoms
are shown
and this pandemic
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keeps
spreading. And it seems that the rush period of the
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virus
will remain for a long time.
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Which
force
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countries
take strict actions to
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prevent
the corona
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virus
. They set resolutions to overcome this obstacle. They impose curfew, shut down schools and universities and close entertainment places which means
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less
activities are happening in the
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country
.
For example
, if the curfew imposed the vehicles will not
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move
which means there is no need for the fossil fuels.
However
,
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countries
such as the United Arab Emirates and Saudi Arabia export grease to America in result of excess amount of coat they have, thereby the coat costs is remarkable decreasing and it is cheaper than the one bottle of water
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because
nobody
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buys
oil.

Countries
are concerned
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because
the economy reaches rock bottom. If recession decays the
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country
will go bankrupt and
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people
will not take their salary.
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A lot of
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countries
tackled this problem with wise resolutions. They do distance working and learning
instead
of stopping the work
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because
if the education
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
stops
the recession will never develop. With this solution
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people
can continue their work without any barriers.
Additionally
, existing of online shopping can stimulate the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
buy
and sell method among
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
.

The economy is an essential factor for the
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country
to prosper. Corona
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virus
pandemic are affecting the economy and
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countries
are nervous about losing their funds.
Thus
, force the
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countries
impose distance learning and working to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
ease
the issue.
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IELTS essay Some people believe that exercising in the morning is best. On the other hand, other people say that exercising in the evening is more beneficial. Which do opinion do you agree with and why v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
308 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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