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Some people believe that capital punishment should never be used. Others, however, argue that it should be allowed for the most serious crimes. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. v.1

Some people believe that capital punishment should never be used. Others, however, argue that it should be allowed for the most serious crimes. v. 1
It is undeniable that people often commit crimes and different kinds of punishments are associated with them such as a jail sentence, dealth penalty and much more. However, some people contend that killing someone legally for punishment is totally unacceptable, whereas other people insist that this kind of punishment is legal in the case of dangerous crimes. This essay will discuss why the capital punishment is preposterous despite some potential cases of most serious criminals, including with my own personal perspective. To begin with, the vast majority of people argue that the legal authorities should avoid dealth penalties to the criminals. Being an offender sometime people commit crimes that have negative implications for the society, but killing that person would not eradicate the effects of that particular crime even after the death of criminal their family member may start committing crimes immensely in order to take the revenge. In that case, the crime rate will increasingly likely in the society. For instance, one research article suggests that almost 50% dealth penalties, creates the more criminals in the society because sometime the crime is not much serious such as robbery, but a person lost their life and his/her close one's make the situation more worsen. Thus, a lifelong jail sentence is an alternative option, despite killing someone in the form of punishment. Conversely, other folks have a contradictory view point and think that this kind of punishment is required if offenders offend the crimes that have serious consequences. Because if the government will take the rape cases and shooting others by using guns that kind of crimes easily, then it will ultimately encourage the more people and this will become the part of people's daily routine eventually. Indeed, there have been some recorded instances of the people who have been punished by the dealth penalties due to the seriousness in their actions that they have done. In addition, almost 5 years ago a gang rape case was noticed in the Delhi, India but the people who involved in the rape did not give any punishment and after that 8-9 that kind of case has happened in India. Overall, capital punishment for a serious crime is an absolute imperative. In conclusion, the people who are against the capital punishment have an entire understanding about the value of life and they suggested other options for being punished the offenders. In my opinion, this kind of punishment should be eradicated at a large extent, but if a person will commit the crime intentionally then the death penalty is entirely justified.
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crimes
and
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kinds
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punishments
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dealth
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penalty
and much more.
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,
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some
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people
contend that killing someone
legally
for
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punishment
is
totally
unacceptable, whereas
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other
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people
insist that this
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kind
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punishment
is legal in the case of
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dangerous
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crimes
. This essay will discuss why the capital
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punishment
is preposterous despite
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some
potential cases of most
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serious
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criminals
, including with my
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own
personal perspective.

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begin
with, the vast majority of
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people
argue that the legal authorities should avoid
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dealth
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penalties
to the
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criminals
. Being an offender sometime
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people
commit
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crimes
that have
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negative
implications for the society,
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but
killing that person would not eradicate the effects of that particular
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crime
even after the death of
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criminal
their family member may
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start
committing
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crimes
immensely
in order to take the revenge.
In that case
, the
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crime
rate will
increasingly
likely in the society.
For instance
, one research article suggests that almost 50%
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dealth
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penalties
, creates the more
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criminals
in the society
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because
sometime the
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crime
is not much
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serious
such as robbery,
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but
a person lost their
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life
and his/her close one's
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make
the situation more worsen.
Thus
, a lifelong jail sentence is an alternative option, despite killing someone in the form of punishment.

Conversely
,
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other
folks have a contradictory view point and
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think
that this
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kind
of
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punishment
is required
if offenders offend the
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crimes
that have
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serious
consequences.
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Because
if the
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government
will take the rape cases and shooting others by using guns that
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kind
of
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crimes
easily
, then it will
ultimately
encourage the more
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people
and this will become the part of
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people
's daily routine
eventually
.
Indeed
, there have been
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some
recorded instances of the
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people
who have
been punished
by the
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dealth
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penalties
due to the seriousness in their actions that they have done.
In addition
, almost 5 years ago a gang rape case
was noticed
in the Delhi, India
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but
the
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people
who involved in the rape did not give any
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punishment
and after that 8-9 that
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kind
of case has happened in India.
Overall
, capital
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punishment
for a
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serious
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crime
is an absolute imperative.

In conclusion
, the
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people
who are against the capital
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punishment
have an entire understanding about the value of
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life and
they suggested
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other
options for
being punished
the offenders. In my opinion, this
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kind
of
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punishment
should
be eradicated
at a large extent,
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but
if a person will commit the
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crime
intentionally
then the death
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penalty
is
entirely
justified.
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IELTS essay Some people believe that capital punishment should never be used. Others, however, argue that it should be allowed for the most serious crimes. v. 1

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426 words
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