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Some people believe that anyone can create art such as painting, poetry, music and so on. Others think that a person should have special abilities to create art. Discuss both views and give your opinion. v.3

Some people believe that anyone can create art such as painting, poetry, music and so on. Others think that a person should have special abilities to create art. v. 3
Art is an assorted choice of the people with a lot of imagination and creativity. Artists imagine the environment in a different way and portray that in their painting. However, some people advocate that expertise in any artistry can be achieved by anyone with practice. I opine that art is a creative task and one cannot excel in their career just by practising. This essay will discuss both the views in detail. Firstly, it is rightly said that the creative people are usually successful in fields like painting, poetry and music. For example, a painter needs to know different blends of colour which can make the painting more natural and attractive. Similarly, a musician should be capable to express different emotions in the music composed by him. In addition to it, dancers should have the skills to convey a story or situation through their performance. On the other hand, some people undergo regress training to gain knowledge in a specific field. Confidence and perseverance can make an artist to win many accolades in their field of work. For example, hard work enabled Sudha Chandaran, a handicapped person, to get the Bharat Ratna award for her exemplary contribution to the field of dance. Moreover, without gaining knowledge about the recent advancements in the art forms, a creative person may not be able to have a competitive advantage over others. To conclude, I opine that any form of art is an arduous task. Along with imagination an artist has to be put enough efforts to manage the ever-changing world and to create masterpieces
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Art
is an assorted choice of the
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people
with
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a lot of
imagination and creativity. Artists imagine the environment in a
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different
way and portray that in their painting.
However
,
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some
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people
advocate that expertise in any artistry can
be achieved
by anyone with practice. I opine that
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art
is a creative task and one cannot excel in their career
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just
by
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practising
. This essay will discuss both the views in detail.

Firstly
, it is
rightly
said that the creative
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people
are
usually
successful in
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fields
like painting, poetry and music.
For example
, a painter needs to know
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different
blends of
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colour
which can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
the painting more natural and attractive.
Similarly
, a musician should be capable to express
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different
emotions in the music composed by him.
In addition
to it, dancers should have the
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skills
to convey a story or situation through their performance.

On the other hand
,
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some
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people
undergo regress training
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to gain
knowledge in a specific
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field
. Confidence and perseverance can
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make
an artist to win
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many
accolades in their
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field
of work.
For example
,
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hard
work enabled
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Sudha
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Chandaran
, a handicapped person, to
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get
the Bharat
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Ratna
award for her exemplary contribution to the
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field
of dance.
Moreover
, without gaining knowledge about the recent advancements in the
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art
forms, a creative person may not be able to have a competitive advantage over others.

To conclude
, I opine that any form of
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art
is an arduous task. Along with imagination an artist
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has to
be put
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enough
efforts to manage the ever-changing world and to create
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masterpieces
8.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
8.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8.5Mistakes
A special kind of beauty exists which is born in language, of language, and for language.
Gaston Bachelard

IELTS essay Some people believe that anyone can create art such as painting, poetry, music and so on. Others think that a person should have special abilities to create art. v. 3

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
260 words
8.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 8.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 8.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 8.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 8.5
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