It has been argued by many that the crime rate has increased in many parts of the world and the best way to control is to enhance the police on the roads. In my opinion, I agree with this as the policemen will be very effective in this, but the creation of awareness in the masses will also help in this struggle.
On the one hand, increasing the army will be helpful to control the criminals. Firstly, the law enforcing agencies on the streets will create a deterrence in the population. Secondly, the laws will be implemented in true letter and spirit. Moreover, the individuals with bad intentions will be afraid of getting caught and being punished. So, all this will produce a safe environment for the living. For example, the government of Belgium has increased the strength of forces to counter terrorism.
On the other hand, the state should inculcate a sense of responsibility in its citizens. There should be mass campaigns organized at the national level to create a feeling of hatred against those who break the laws. Furthermore, every individual must be given basic training of self defence and to combat with the terrorists. Although, it's a difficult task, but it will help in decreasing such heinous activities. For instance, the Switzerland has almost no army and still it has negligible criminal activity due to the educated populace.
To conclude, I believe that the rulers should invest both in the education of the people and expansion of the soldiers to counter the law and order situations.
It has
been argued
by
many
that the crime rate has increased in
many
parts of the world and the best way to control is to enhance the police on the roads. In my opinion, I
agree
with this as the policemen will be
very
effective in this,
but
the creation of awareness in the masses will
also
help
in this struggle.
On the one hand, increasing the army will be helpful to control the criminals.
Firstly
, the
law
enforcing agencies on the streets will create a deterrence in the population.
Secondly
, the
laws
will
be implemented
in true letter and spirit.
Moreover
, the individuals with
bad
intentions will be afraid of getting caught and
being punished
.
So
, all this will produce a safe environment for the living.
For example
, the
government
of Belgium has increased the strength of forces to counter terrorism.
On the other hand
, the state should inculcate a sense of responsibility in its citizens. There should be mass campaigns organized at the national level to create a feeling of hatred against those who break the
laws
.
Furthermore
, every individual
must
be
given
basic training of
self defence
and to combat with the terrorists. Although, it's a difficult task,
but
it will
help
in decreasing such heinous activities.
For instance
, the Switzerland has almost no army and
still
it has negligible criminal activity due to the educated populace.
To conclude
, I believe that the rulers should invest both in the education of the
people
and expansion of the soldiers to counter the
law
and order situations.
8.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
8.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8.5Mistakes