Due to developing technology, picture and word in journal, advertisement and newspaper was becoming more beautiful and easier to read that makes the producer can give resident lots of good information. Personally, I completely agree that the good news should be used more than bad news.
There are two main reasons why journalists should write positive news. One reason is that help resident has a good sense of life this mean bad news can make human have a negative perception of life. A few months ago, when individual was worried about a criminal committing murder, however, many people posted on the Internet that he had fled or more human was killed. Which renders individual own ugly awareness that they could kill others, then run then run away.
Another reason is that bad news disrupts our thinking this means news items distract and engage us in something other than what we must do. Our ability to focus diminishes the most often we read. For example, in over the world, many countries are facing with the deadly plague called Covid-19. Have a lot of fake news was uploaded that leads to citizen can’t work online because they are caught up negative news. Which makes resident always think they must keep up to date with the news.
In conclusion, for the reasons I have mentioned above, I strongly believe that in the internet or newspaper we should increase positive good news in their publication. However, from my personally, the government in any country need to improve network security for repelling bad and fake news
Due to developing technology, picture and word in journal, advertisement and newspaper was becoming more
beautiful
and easier to read that
makes
the producer can give resident lots of
good
information.
Personally
, I completely
agree
that the
good
news
should be
used
more than
bad
news.
There are two main
reasons
why journalists should write
positive
news
. One
reason
is that
help
resident has a
good
sense of life this mean
bad
news
can
make
human have a
negative
perception of life. A few months ago, when individual
was worried
about a criminal committing murder,
however
,
many
people
posted on the Internet that he had fled or more human
was killed
. Which renders individual
own
ugly awareness that they could kill others,
then run then run
away.
Another
reason
is that
bad
news
disrupts our thinking this means
news
items distract and engage us in something other than what we
must
do. Our ability to focus diminishes the most
often
we read.
For example
, in over the world,
many
countries are facing with the deadly plague called Covid-19. Have
a lot of
fake
news
was uploaded
that leads to citizen can’t work online
because
they
are caught
up
negative
news
.
Which
makes
resident always
think
they
must
keep
up to date with the news.
In conclusion
, for the
reasons
I have mentioned above, I
strongly
believe that in the internet or newspaper we should increase
positive
good
news
in their publication.
However
, from my
personally
, the
government
in any country need to
improve
network security for repelling
bad
and fake
news
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes