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In your country, is there more need for land to be left in its natural conditions or is there more need for land to be developed for housing and industry? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. v.1

In your country, is there more need for land to be left in its natural conditions or is there more need for land to be developed for housing and industry? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. v. 1
Perhaps no subject around the world causes as much controversy as education does. Some people believed that it is much more effective to allocate ample funds on latest technology. This essay will discuss both sides of the argument and provide evidence why the investing in computer technologies is superior. Automation may eventually replace all human labours that do not require specific and complex human skills. Many institutions will turn to Artificial intelligence because it is far less expensive then hiring, training and employing teachers. For instance, in Australia after a recent pandemic, 90% of education institution are opting for online classes where individual can access recorded lecture at their convenient time, in addition these automated stations work around the clock and require no holidays and holidays pay. Conversely, there are some circumstances where a student required a physical contact with their mentors so that they can clarify their misunderstanding of particular topics and indeed their desire for more motivation to complete their task. A recent study suggests at Oxford university suggest that each batch carries 30% of students that need their mentor's attention to complete their task effectively. Besides, the knowledge and experience a teacher is having is challenging to replace and no matter how advance the technology becomes will never be able to achieve what has taken social evolution hundred of thousand of years to achieve. In conclusion, although teachers with a high salary are considered to be highly beneficial for the educational system, I believe that financial support for providing computers has far advantages. They alter the way knowledge is transferred and provide gratitude for pupils.
Perhaps no subject around the world causes as much controversy as education does.
Some
people
believed that it is much more effective to allocate ample funds on latest technology. This essay will discuss both sides of the argument and provide evidence why the investing in computer technologies is superior.

Automation may
eventually
replace all human
labours
that do not require specific and complex human
skills
.
Many
institutions will turn to Artificial intelligence
because
it is far less expensive
then
hiring, training and employing teachers.
For instance
, in Australia after a recent pandemic, 90% of education institution are opting for online classes where individual can access recorded lecture at their convenient time,
in addition
these automated stations work around the clock and require no holidays and holidays pay.

Conversely
, there are
some
circumstances where a student required a physical contact with their mentors
so
that they can clarify their misunderstanding of particular topics and
indeed
their desire for more motivation to complete their task. A recent study suggests at Oxford university suggest that each batch carries 30% of students that need their mentor's attention to complete their task
effectively
.
Besides
, the knowledge and experience a teacher is having is challenging
to replace
and no matter how advance the technology becomes will never be able to achieve what has taken social evolution
hundred
of thousand of years to achieve.

In conclusion
, although teachers with a high salary
are considered
to be
highly
beneficial for the educational system, I believe that financial support for providing computers has far advantages. They alter the way knowledge
is transferred
and provide gratitude for pupils.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes

IELTS essay In your country, is there more need for land to be left in its natural conditions or is there more need for land to be developed for housing and industry? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
268 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
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Lexical Resource: 7.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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