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Some people believe online reading material should be only be used for child to learn to read, whereas others belive only printed material should be used. Discuss both views and give your opinion. v.1

Some people believe online reading material should be only be used for child to learn to read, whereas others belive only printed material should be used. v. 1
The electronic reading material is suggested by an amount of people to be used exclusively for infants to learn to read, whereas others think that ought to be used printed reading material. In my opinion, the use of both digital and paper materials should be adjusted to the needs of the user. However, I prefer a deep understanding granted by books. Digitally reading books have shown critical development of the full skill related to an increment of reading speed, scanning and skimming through the passages, easy to get a paragraph general idea, able to read into the dark, and easier to carry on. In contrast, ebooks has also revealed to be highly distracted due to its multitasking faces, and the most significant issue for researchers is eyesight damages such as sore eyes, eyes strain and deterioration of vision. On the other hand, printed reading material is more suitable for profound concentration, which increases the focus on details, leisure activity, and there are not date recorded of any illness. For instead, neck stiffness and sore eyes. On the contrary, papers are not easy to carry to be able to read on a daily basis commute. To conclude, both cases have enough strengths and weakness to keep in mind for children's education. Both ought to be taught looking for different effects. For example, ebooks for team work such as sentence completion and printed material for detailed characterisation of art assignment. In my opinion, profound knowledge grants strong conversational skill (talkative), giving the chance to talk with anyone.
The electronic
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reading
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is suggested
by an amount of
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people
to be
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used
exclusively for infants to learn to read, whereas others
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think
that ought to be
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used
printed
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reading
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material
. In my opinion, the
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use
of both digital and paper
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materials
should
be adjusted
to the needs of the user.
However
, I prefer a deep understanding granted by books.

Digitally
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reading
books have shown critical development of the full
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skill
related to an increment of
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reading
speed, scanning and skimming through the passages, easy to
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get
a paragraph general
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idea
, able to read into the dark, and easier to carry on.
In contrast
,
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ebooks
has
also
revealed to be
highly
distracted due to its multitasking faces, and the most significant issue for researchers is eyesight damages such as sore eyes, eyes strain and deterioration of vision.

On the other hand
, printed
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reading
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
material
is more suitable for profound concentration, which increases the focus on
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
details
, leisure activity, and there are not date recorded of any illness. For
instead
, neck stiffness and sore eyes.
On the contrary
, papers are not easy to carry to be able to read on a daily basis commute.

To conclude
, both cases have
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enough
strengths and weakness to
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keep
in mind for children's education. Both ought to
be taught
looking for
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different
effects.
For example
,
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ebooks
for team work such as sentence completion and printed
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
material
for detailed
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characterisation
of art assignment. In my opinion, profound knowledge grants strong conversational
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skill
(talkative), giving the chance to talk with anyone.
9Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
10Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes

IELTS essay Some people believe online reading material should be only be used for child to learn to read, whereas others belive only printed material should be used. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
255 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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