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Some people believe that online reading material should only be used for a child to learn to read, whereas, other believe only printed material should be used. Discuss both views and give your opinion. v.1

Some people believe that online reading material should only be used for a child to learn to read, whereas, other believe only printed material should be used. v. 1
Reading through online or printed books is being a debatable issue nowadays. While some think that children should read through printed material, I, however, agree with those who think that online resource is a good platform for them for learning to read. On the one hand, it could be argued that printing material is far better than the online materials which are available on the internet. It is believed that before the era of technology, we have been following the traditional method for learning to read which is printed books by well-know authors or publications. For example, in India, 85% of the schools still follow the old method for the offspring to read the books as it is easy for the teachers to teach them. Besides this, such materials are said to be known the best because many children often understand easily by looking at the pictures or highlighting some main points or making notes next to the material for the future reference. On the other hand, I would argue that the best resource for learning to read is online. This is because a lot of materials are available on the internet, such as, videos or songs, which many schools or college students can use for learning and reading. For example, in China, 65% of youngsters understand very well by accessing various materials which are available online and found to be more intelligent than those who access printed materials. Moreover, in my opinion, such a method is convenient for all students. The majority of children can indeed access such material from any part of the world at any time with the single click with the help of the internet. In conclusion, although it is undeniable that printed material is being followed before the advent of technology and easy for the readers to make notes or highlight the main points, I believe that reading online is easily accessible from any corner of the world at our convenience. Therefore, on balance, I strongly believe that online material should be used not only for reading but also for learning.
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resource is a
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good
platform for them for
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learning
to read.

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be argued
that printing
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material
is far better than the
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online
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materials
which are available on the internet. It
is believed
that
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before
the era of technology, we have been following the traditional method for
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learning
to
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read
which is
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printed
books by well-know authors or publications.
For example
, in India, 85% of the schools
still
follow the
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old
method for the offspring to
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read
the books as it is easy for the teachers to teach them.
Besides
this, such
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materials
are said
to
be known
the best
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because
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many
children
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understand
easily
by looking at the pictures or highlighting
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some
main points or making notes
next
to the
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material
for the future reference.

On the other hand
, I would argue that the best resource for
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learning
to
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read
is
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online
. This is
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because
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a lot of
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materials
are available on the internet, such as, videos or songs, which
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many
schools or college students can
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for
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learning
and
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reading
.
For example
, in China, 65% of youngsters understand
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very
well by accessing various
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materials
which are available
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online
and found to be more intelligent than those who access
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printed
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materials
.
Moreover
, in my opinion, such a method is convenient for all students. The majority of children can
indeed
access such
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material
from any part of the world at any time with the single click with the
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help
of the internet.

In conclusion
, although it is undeniable that
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printed
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is
being followed
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before
the advent of technology and easy for the readers to
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make
notes or highlight the main points, I believe that
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reading
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online
is
easily
accessible from any corner of the world at our convenience.
Therefore
, on balance, I
strongly
believe that
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online
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should be
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reading
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also
for
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.
8.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
8.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8.5Mistakes
Language comes first. It’s not that language grows out of consciousness, if you haven’t got language, you can’t be conscious.
Alan Moore

IELTS essay Some people believe that online reading material should only be used for a child to learn to read, whereas, other believe only printed material should be used. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
346 words
8.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 8.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 8.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 8.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 8.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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