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some people believe govt must apply high taxes to provide good public service to everyone. Give your opinion v.1

some people believe govt must apply high taxes to provide good public service to everyone. Give your opinion v. 1
Even if taxes are a primary source of income for the government, still "apply high tax rates or note" is an ongoing debate question in every country. It is believed by many people that high tax rates results in the better public service. On the other hand, this idea is opposed by many residents. In this essay we will argue why higher tax rates negatively impact general public over the nominal tax rates. In many countries, people are already paying hefty tax rates, if more tax is imposed on them, there will be two drawbacks mainly. One is, the taxpayers will feel overburdened and second is they will be de-motivated by this step. For instance, in India only 6% people are paying taxes and other are enjoying on that. So it will be a complete injustice to them by imposing more taxes. It is better for the government to make policies which include more person in taxable slab rather than increasing tax rates on limited personals. As this essay argued implementing huge taxes has negative results like more money can lead government officers to misuse this fund. So it is essential for the government to decide the right amount of taxes to make equilibrium between the government income and the public's paying capacity. Although taxes, which are paid by mass, are used for public services such as roads, schools and hospitals etc. But if people are de-motivated and not happy with the policies, then it is all in vain. This essay argued why high tax rates are not advisable and the government should come up with the right amount of tax rates for people according to their income group. It's my personal view not to overburden tax payers and always think about both sides of the coin.
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apply high
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tax
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rates
or note
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is an ongoing debate question in every country. It
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people
that high
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results in the better public service.
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is opposed
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many
residents. In this essay we will argue why higher
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negatively
impact
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general public
over the nominal
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tax
rates.

In
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countries,
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people
are already paying hefty
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tax
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rates
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is imposed
on them, there will be two drawbacks
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people
are paying
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and other are enjoying on that.
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it will be a complete injustice to them by imposing more
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taxes
. It is better for the
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government
to
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make
policies which include more person in taxable slab
rather
than increasing
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tax
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rates
on limited personals.

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taxes
has
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negative
results like more money can lead
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government
officers to misuse this fund.
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So
it is essential for the
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government
to decide the right amount of
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taxes
to
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make
equilibrium between the
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government
income and the public's paying capacity. Although
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taxes
, which
are paid
by mass, are
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used
for public services such as roads, schools and hospitals etc.
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But
if
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people
are
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de-motivated
and not happy with the policies, then it is all in vain.

This essay argued why high
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tax
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rates
are not advisable and the
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government
should
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come
up with the right amount of
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tax
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rates
for
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people
according to their income group. It's my personal view not to overburden
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tax
payers and always
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think
about both sides of the coin.
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IELTS essay some people believe govt must apply high taxes to provide good public service to everyone. Give your opinion v. 1

Essay
  American English
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