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Some people believe that governments must apply high taxes to provide good public services for everyone. Give your opinion. v.2

Some people believe that governments must apply high taxes to provide good public services for everyone. Give your opinion. v. 2
Imposing taxes is how governments generate revenue they require to run the country. Although the common believe is that high tax rates are crucial for the betterment of public services, there are groups who would argue against this. This essay will demonstrate why taxing at a higher rate is necessary to ensure better public services for all, and to ensure proper wealth distribution in the society. The economic development of a country is dependent on the development of infrastructure such as roads, electricity, bridges etc. The government pays for these through the amount generated from taxes. By charging more taxes, authorities can ensure greater developments of public services. This is evident from the developed countries where they tax you more, but in return you get more in the forms of public services. While in developing countries, as you do not have to pay hefty taxes, you won’t get to enjoy better public services. High tax rates, thus serve to the overall development of the country. Taxes also play an important role in creating a balanced society through the distribution of wealth. Taxes are usually not imposed at a flat rate rather on an increasing rate as opposed to your wealth. That means, the wealthy people pay more tax than those of less fortunate. As tax is used for the betterment of all in the form of public services, this creates a better distribution of wealth within the society. To conclude, higher tax rates are co-related to better public services. However, taxing at an abnormally high rate may result in people losing interest in earning more, thus hurting the economy. In my opinion, the government should find perfect tax rates that appreciates economy, and also generates enough revenue for the public services.
Imposing
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taxes
is how
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governments
generate revenue they require to run the
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country
. Although the common believe is that high
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tax
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rates
are crucial for the betterment of
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public
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services
, there are groups who would argue against this. This essay will demonstrate why taxing at a higher
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rate
is necessary to ensure
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better
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public
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services
for all, and to ensure proper
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wealth
distribution in the society.

The economic
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development
of a
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country
is dependent on the
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development
of infrastructure such as roads, electricity, bridges etc. The
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government
pays for these through the amount generated from
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taxes
. By charging more
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taxes
, authorities can ensure greater
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developments
of
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public
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services
. This is evident from the developed
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countries
where they
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tax
you more,
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but
in return you
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get
more in the forms of
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public
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services
. While in developing
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countries
, as you do not
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have to
pay hefty
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taxes
, you won’t
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get
to enjoy
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better
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public
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services
. High
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tax
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rates
,
thus
serve to the
overall
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development
of the country.

Taxes
also
play an
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important
role in creating a balanced society through the distribution of
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wealth
.
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Taxes
are
usually
not imposed at a flat
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rate
rather
on an increasing
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rate
as opposed to your
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wealth
. That means, the wealthy
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people
pay more
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tax
than those of less fortunate. As
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tax
is
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used
for the betterment of all in the form of
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public
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services
, this creates a
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better
distribution of
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wealth
within the society.

To conclude
, higher
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tax
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rates
are co-related to
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better
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public
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services
.
However
, taxing at an
abnormally
high
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rate
may result in
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people
losing interest in earning more,
thus
hurting the economy. In my opinion, the
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government
should find perfect
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tax
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rates
that appreciates economy, and
also
generates
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enough
revenue for the
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public
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services
.
10Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
52Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Mistakes
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IELTS essay Some people believe that governments must apply high taxes to provide good public services for everyone. Give your opinion. v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
291 words
6.5
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