In the modern world, many people are reckoned to think that the cellphones are beneficial for children, while others differ with it. I would completely agree with them who deem that this approach is acceptable. This essay will discuss both views and explain my belief followed by relevant examples.
On the one hand, those who hold the assumption that mobile phones are only ruining their child's creativity. Firstly, if you ever go through any education website, there is always a mobile app available. This is because, through mobile application, it is convenient even for small children to engage into intresting clips. For instance, it is often seen that children are more engaged into seeing animated characters. Thus, many apps are creating content accordingly. In contrast, children would miss out on an opportunity to learn something new in a very innovative way.
On the other hand, looking this matter from another point of view, it does have a lot of disadvantages as well. It is welll known fact that extensive usage of mobile phone could lead to strain in eyes. Of course, we must keep a safe distance from screen. Moreover it is supposed to increase sitting time, which could lead to many heath issues, obesity. For instance, according to a recent survey conducted by health department, more than 25% of children age ranging from 8-14 years are facing obesity issues.
To conclude, although there are some isses with extensive usage of mobile phones, In my opinion, it is very important for young ones to interact and utilise these modern technology gadgets to broaden the horizon. 
In the modern world,  
many
  people
  are reckoned
 to  
think
 that the cellphones are beneficial for  
children
, while others differ with it. I would completely  
agree
 with them who deem that this approach is acceptable. This essay will discuss both views and  
explain
 my belief followed by relevant examples.
On the one hand, those who hold the assumption that mobile phones are  
only
 ruining their child's creativity.  
Firstly
, if you ever go through any education website, there is always a mobile app available. This is  
because
, through mobile application, it is convenient even for  
small
  children
 to engage into  
intresting
 clips.  
For instance
, it is  
often
  seen
 that  
children
 are more engaged into seeing animated characters.  
Thus
,  
many
 apps are creating content  
accordingly
.  
In contrast
,  
children
 would miss out on an opportunity to learn something new in a  
very
 innovative way. 
On the other hand
, looking this matter from another point of view, it does have  
a lot of
 disadvantages  
as well
. It is  
welll
 known fact that extensive usage of mobile phone could lead to strain in eyes.  
Of course
, we  
must
  keep
 a safe distance from screen.  
Moreover
 it  
is supposed
 to increase sitting time, which could lead to  
many
 heath issues, obesity.  
For instance
, according to a recent survey conducted by health department, more than 25% of  
children
 age ranging from 8-14 years are facing obesity issues. 
To conclude
, although there are  
some
  isses
 with extensive usage of mobile phones, In my opinion, it is  
very
  important
 for young ones to interact and  
utilise
 these modern technology gadgets to broaden the horizon.