An announcement intended to inform people about a specific product, service or employment opportunity is known as advertisement. Advertisements play an important role in achieving the sales target of any product. Thus, I strongly agreed that advertisements are necessary to aware customers about the pros and cons of any product or service. (52)
We had seen in the past that people buy all the products and services directly from markets or institutions. There was no concept of advertisements in many parts of the world until the invention of information technology in the 19th century. (40)
Presently, the trend of advertisement is spreading all over the world. Nowadays, advertisements are necessary in order to attract the attention of customers towards new products and services. For example, all the mobile companies used massive advertisements to motivate consumers towards new models of cell phone with latest features. Similarly, in the garments industry, advertisements not only inform people about the new design and latest fashion, but also play a major role in attaining their sales target. (76)
The recent development in Science and information technology has enabled the people to buy any product online over the internet. All the international brands have advertised their products online in order to facilitate the people. Thus, if the people keep on buying advertised products, then it will surely become a compulsory element in the sale of any product in near future. (61)
Thus, I strongly believed that advertisements are a great source of getting consumer’s attention and to achieve sales targets of any product even if the product is sold and people buy it. (32)
An announcement intended to inform
people
about a specific
product
,
service
or employment opportunity
is known
as
advertisement
.
Advertisements
play an
important
role in achieving the
sales
target of any
product
.
Thus
, I
strongly
agreed
that
advertisements
are necessary to aware customers about the pros and cons of any
product
or
service
. (52)
We had
seen
in the past that
people
buy
all the
products
and
services
directly
from markets or institutions. There was no concept of
advertisements
in
many
parts of the world until the invention of information technology in the 19th century. (40)
Presently
, the trend of
advertisement
is spreading all over the world. Nowadays,
advertisements
are necessary in order to attract the attention of customers towards new
products
and
services
.
For example
, all the mobile
companies
used
massive
advertisements
to motivate consumers towards new models of cell phone with
latest
features.
Similarly
, in the
garments
industry,
advertisements
not
only
inform
people
about the new design and latest fashion,
but
also
play a major role in attaining their
sales
target. (76)
The recent development in Science and information technology has enabled the
people
to
buy
any
product
online over the internet. All the international brands have advertised their
products
online in order to facilitate the
people
.
Thus
, if the
people
keep
on buying advertised
products
, then it will
surely
become a compulsory element in the
sale
of any
product
in near future. (61)
Thus
, I
strongly
believed that
advertisements
are a great source of getting consumer’s attention and to achieve
sales
targets of any
product
even if the
product
is sold
and
people
buy
it. (32)
8Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
35Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes