Amelioration of technology in communication and transportation enables the opportunity to travel abroad and make new permanent residence with better job. This helps to build a better and secured life. Although contact with family and friends might be limited, but that also can be overcome. In my opinion the benefits outweigh the drawbacks.
In recent days skilled people doing great to abroad. IT professionals, doctors, engineers are going to developed countries and settling there, which giving them the freedom to live a better life. Moreover, they are sending remittance to their own countries which are helping their family members and nations as well. Furthermore, children of them could get a better education and environment that helps them to be raised with better facilities. They could get world class schools, colleges and universities and teachers. In addition, due to this globalization, we can see the mixing of culture and people worldwide. For example, recently an American film star got married with an Indian actress in Indian style and culture. Hence people are exchanging their culture and values in a positive way.
On the other hand getting in touch on Skype, Twitter or Facebook can never be the same as talking face to face. As a result distance grows with old family and friends. Children deprived of the love of grandparents. In addition, we see some kids adopt the foreign culture negatively which hurts their parents.
In conclusion, we see that though people loose vicinity with family and friends ultimately they got benefited financially and with other facilities. It helps them to be raised with a brighter lifestyle.
Amelioration of technology in communication and transportation enables the opportunity to travel abroad and
make
new permanent residence with
better
job. This
helps
to build a
better
and secured life. Although contact with
family
and friends might
be limited
,
but
that
also
can
be overcome
. In my opinion the benefits outweigh the drawbacks.
In recent days skilled
people
doing great to abroad. IT professionals, doctors, engineers are going to
developed
countries and settling there, which giving them the freedom to
live
a
better
life.
Moreover
, they are sending remittance to their
own
countries which are helping their
family
members and nations
as well
.
Furthermore
, children of them could
get
a
better
education and environment that
helps
them to
be raised
with
better
facilities. They could
get
world
class
schools, colleges and universities and teachers.
In addition
, due to this globalization, we can
see
the mixing of
culture
and
people
worldwide.
For example
, recently an American film star
got
married with
an Indian actress in Indian style and
culture
.
Hence
people
are exchanging their
culture
and values in a
positive
way.
On the other hand
getting in touch on Skype, Twitter or Facebook can never be the same as talking face to face.
As a result
distance grows with
old
family
and friends. Children deprived of the
love
of grandparents.
In addition
, we
see
some
kids adopt the foreign
culture
negatively
which hurts their parents.
In conclusion
, we
see
that though
people
loose vicinity with
family
and friends
ultimately
they
got
benefited
financially
and with other facilities. It
helps
them to
be raised
with a brighter lifestyle.
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