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Some companies uniforms for their staff which must be worm at all times. What are advantages for a company of having a uniform Are here any benefit of having a uniform for a staff. v.1

Some companies uniforms for their staff which must be worm at all times. What are advantages for a company of having a uniform Are here any benefit of having a uniform for a staff. v. 1
" company is a place where all the product manufacturers" In which we think about staff uniform position. The company totally depends on his employees because employment no any work possible. In this essay that should people awareness which must be worm at all times for company uniform staff through this topic. I shall range up my point of view in the following subsection. these are some advantages that I explained. Firstly, uniform staff is necessary for company development so this further depends on company benefits, and employees benefits. Although, that when company beneficial effects involved then first step on advertising. That company development by advertising method. Moreover, when company products are views to customer through bill broad then company customer amount automatically incline as well as, company is progressed. When company products advertising shows to public due to it people know that product all the availability z and they are selected a good quality of products. Secondly, employees benefits from company work because employment do his work proper punctuality, and concentration then company are development suddenly. Moving a head, when any company employees do his work with equality then due to equality company achieve more standard steps for improvement. As well as, company of employment depends on company' s facilities provides by company authorities. For example, ADT company is a famous company of electronic communications system. This is only a most famous, and well developed company only on one reason of their employees are work together equality. To conclude, that there is no single conculsion to this question still. That is no only the responsibility of company employees, and manager because this is dependent on everyone' s thoughts. Because when they think positive thought then they automatically more progressed. However, this is more beneficial for nation development.
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achieve more standard steps for improvement.
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IELTS essay Some companies uniforms for their staff which must be worm at all times. What are advantages for a company of having a uniform Are here any benefit of having a uniform for a staff. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
298 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
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  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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