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Some companies have uniforms for their staff which must be worn at all times. What are the advantages for a company of having a uniform? Are there any benefits of having a uniform for the staff? v.1

Some companies have uniforms for their staff which must be worn at all times. What are the advantages for a company of having a uniform? Are there any benefits of having a uniform for the staff? v. 1
There are certain corporations who are strict in their uniforms wearing aspect and should be wear all the times at company. The uniform is beneficial for a company in terms of uniqueness it brings among their rivals and also staff productivity. It is advantageous for employees, due to the fact that it avoids stress and also ensure their security. On the one hand, uniform is beneficial for a company for mainly two reasons. To being with, a branded-work uniform can distinguishes a company from its competitors. A company with having specific dress can be uniquely identified and felt in the business world. It may perform well in their business growth, but if it opt for an unrecognizable uniform, it may affects its image, owing to the fact that it would not be unique and different from their business opponents. Furthermore, specific attire brings equality among employees which, in turn, is beneficial for a company. This is because workers wearing same uniform will felt a sense of matching level to their colleagues, and thus, having job satisfaction, which is essential factor for the staff productivity. For instance, a recent survey by Business School of London concluded that in 2010, companies who have opted for specific uniform are having better performing staff. On the other hand, adopting a uniform is also beneficial for employees. Firstly, same attire on daily-basis would avoid need of choosing it and therefore avoiding stress. Choosing what to wear is really a matter of stress these days, so opting for specific uniform can bring easiness and prevent stress in employees. Secondly, following a company’s uniform is crucial for employee’s security. This is because a staff member can be easily identified by his or her dressing; hence, their protection from an outdoor threat can be easily performed by security personnel’s of a company, by knowing who is a staff member. For example, a report by the American Protection Institute of Business concluded that 5000 employees had been safeguarded from outside threats to different companies in the USA, due to their known attire. In conclusion, wearing a company’s own uniform by employees is a must requirement in some corporations. It is having positive outcomes for a business as it make it unique from their opponents and producing well-performing workers. A uniform is also advantageous for employees, due to avoiding to choose what to wear and their security.
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uniforms
wearing aspect and should be wear all the times at
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company
. The
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uniform
is
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beneficial
for a
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company
in terms of uniqueness it brings among their rivals and
also
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staff
productivity. It is advantageous for
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employees
, due to the fact that it avoids
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stress
and
also
ensure their security.

On the one hand,
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uniform
is
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beneficial
for a
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company
for
mainly
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being
with, a branded-work
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uniform
can
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distinguishes
a
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company
from its competitors. A
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company
with
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having
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specific
dress can be
uniquely
identified and felt in the
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business
world. It may perform well in their
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business
growth,
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if it
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opt
for an unrecognizable
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uniform
, it may
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affects
its image, owing to the fact that it would not be unique and
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different
from their
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business
opponents.
Furthermore
,
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specific
attire brings equality among
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employees
which, in turn, is
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beneficial
for a
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company
. This is
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because
workers wearing same
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uniform
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felt
a sense of matching level to their colleagues, and
thus
,
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having
job satisfaction, which is essential factor for the
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staff
productivity.
For instance
, a recent survey by
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Business
School of London concluded that in 2010,
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companies
who have opted for
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specific
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uniform
are
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having
better performing staff.

On the other hand
, adopting a
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uniform
is
also
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beneficial
for
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employees
.
Firstly
, same attire on daily-basis would avoid need of choosing it and
therefore
avoiding
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stress
. Choosing what to wear is
really
a matter of
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stress
these days,
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so
opting for
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specific
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uniform
can bring easiness and
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prevent
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stress
in
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employees
.
Secondly
, following a
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company’s
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uniform
is crucial for
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employee’s
security. This is
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because
a
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staff
member can be
easily
identified by
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his or her
dressing;
hence
, their protection from an outdoor threat can be
easily
performed by security personnel’s of a
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company
, by knowing who is a
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staff
member.
For example
, a report by the American Protection Institute of
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Business
concluded that 5000
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employees
had been
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safeguarded from
outside threats to
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different
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companies
in the USA, due to their known attire.

In conclusion
, wearing a
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own
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uniform
by
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employees
is a
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requirement in
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some
corporations. It is
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having
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positive
outcomes for a
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business
as it
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make
it unique from their opponents and producing well-performing workers. A
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uniform
is
also
advantageous for
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employees
, due to
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avoiding to choose
what to wear and their security.
18Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
57Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes

IELTS essay Some companies have uniforms for their staff which must be worn at all times. What are the advantages for a company of having a uniform? Are there any benefits of having a uniform for the staff? v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
397 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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