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Some companies have uniforms for their staff which must be worn at all timesWhat are the advantages for a company of having a uniform? Are there any benefits of having uniform for the staff? v.2

Some companies have uniforms for their staff which must be worn at all timesWhat are the advantages for a company of having a uniform? Are there any benefits of having uniform for the staff? v. 2
Workers in many companies are directed to wear specific uniform which should be used during their working hours. There are a lot of benefits to companies and their employees with the use of this uniform. To begin with, large number of people are working in many industries and they belong to different societies. So there should be some rules and regulations for the employees of these companies. Specific uniform is one the main component of the company for their workers and it helps in the development of a company, for example, there is feasibility in identifying of staff by the costumers which result in good interaction between employees and customers. In contrast, using same color of uniform give a variety of advantages to companies staff as well. For instance, there will be equality among all the staff members, and there will be no class difference between workers, whether he/ she belongs to a high or low class family. Secondly, specific uniform can be used as a mark of identification of that specific company and for their workers, as most uniforms have their companies name mentioned on it, which helps to identify a company name even from their staff uniform. Therefore, using of uniform by the employees of an industry is beneficially important for the a company and its staff members, and it should be used in all working hours and every company needs to make it necessary for their employees.
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during their working hours. There are
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companies
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have their
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name mentioned on it, which
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to identify a
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name even from their
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uniform.

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uniform
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employees
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35Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay Some companies have uniforms for their staff which must be worn at all timesWhat are the advantages for a company of having a uniform? Are there any benefits of having uniform for the staff? v. 2

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
240 words
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text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
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