It's been a debatable concern since a long a period of time, whether a person should be entitled to higher studies or not to be successful in the present world.
It's my firm belief that University or equivalent academic institute plays a role up to a certain extent in producing an accomplished human being. In this essay, I will justify my opinion with evidences.
First and foremost determining factor for growth are the intrinsic human values. These get imbibed by many sources like parents, social network along with circumstances. To illustrate, many successful people from the myriad of different walks of life like science, spirituality and environment etc. Have never attended the tertiary education. On the other hand, the graduates from many prestigious institutes have been seen tempted to wrong deeds and eventually ruining their lives. As a result, moral values are a deterministic factor.
Moreover, it is an individual's courage and determination which plays a major role on the path to accomplish being. To solve the big challenges of life, it takes a lot of patience and perseverance, which no contemporary higher education provides. To exemplify, many new entrepreneurs from all across the world who achieved success by ardently and persistently working passionately. Moreover, natural born instinct has a bit of its part in this distinctive journey.
To conclude, higher education is very conducive to make a person, albeit it is the human values and individual's characteristics are more deterministic factors which ultimately leads them to be an accomplished person. 
It's been a debatable concern since a long a period of time, whether a person should  
be entitled
 to higher studies or not to be successful in the present world.
It's my firm belief that University or equivalent academic institute plays a role up to a certain extent in producing an accomplished human being. In this essay, I will justify my opinion with evidences. 
First
 and foremost determining factor for growth are the intrinsic human values. These  
get
 imbibed by  
many
 sources like parents, social network along with circumstances. To illustrate,  
many
 successful  
people
 from the myriad of  
different
 walks of life like science, spirituality and environment etc. Have never attended the tertiary education.  
On the other hand
, the graduates from  
many
 prestigious institutes have been  
seen
 tempted to  
wrong
 deeds and  
eventually
 ruining their  
lives
.  
As a result
, moral values are a deterministic factor. 
Moreover
, it is an individual's courage and determination which plays a major role on the path to accomplish being. To solve the  
big
 challenges of life, it takes  
a lot of
 patience and perseverance, which no contemporary higher education provides. To exemplify,  
many
 new entrepreneurs from all across the world who achieved success by  
ardently
 and  
persistently
 working  
passionately
.  
Moreover
,  
natural born
 instinct has a bit of its part in this distinctive journey. 
To conclude
, higher education is  
very
 conducive to  
make
 a person, albeit it is the human values and individual's characteristics are more deterministic factors which  
ultimately
 leads them to be an accomplished person. 
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