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66. Some students prefer the internet-based teaching. Others prefer to study intraditional classrooms. Which method of studying do you prefer and why? 6 v.1

66. Some students prefer the internet-based teaching. Others prefer to study intraditional classrooms. Which method of studying do you prefer and why? 6 v. 1
Nowadays, many people thought that education is consuming too much time without getting the actual use of it which is applying it into the field. In this essay we will see how this opinion is not accurate. The era we live in is moving so fast that we need to keep up not only in learning but also in applying what we learn in the field and know well how we apply it the right way. That is why some students say that “we are taking too much time on learning facts and not enough on learning practical skills”, that way of thinking is little wrong as we need to acquire a knowledge of science first then we will be able to understand how to put it in the right place. Furthermore, scholars must have the patience needed to acquire the knowledge needed and make researches to increase their way of thinking, these procedures will definitely increase their practical skills automatically. They also must not depend on university on getting the information or knowledge but also, they must make surveys on their studies. Not only practical skills only can jump your knowledge to the roof nor learning the facts only it is a sort of combination between both. To conclude, knowledge and practical skills are in the same scale and must be balanced, as you do not need to put all your time on learning facts without applying them also its wrong to make the most of your time on learning practical skills without knowledge that strength it.
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of it which is applying it into the field. In this essay we will
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how this opinion is not accurate.

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in is moving
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in applying what we learn in the field and know well how we apply it the right way.
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students say that “we are taking too much
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facts and not
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as we need to acquire a
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of science
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then we will be able to understand how to put it in the right place.

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researches to increase their way of thinking, these procedures will definitely increase their
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surveys on their studies. Not
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it is a sort of combination between both.

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are in the same scale and
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IELTS essay 66. Some students prefer the internet-based teaching. Others prefer to study intraditional classrooms. Which method of studying do you prefer and why? 6 v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
258 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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