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Some believe that training is necessary to be a good teacher, others think that teachers don’t need a training course. Discuss both views and give your opinions. v.1

Some believe that training is necessary to be a good teacher, others think that teachers don’t need a training course. v. 1
A percentage of people believe that to be a good teacher training is a necessity, while others thinks that trainings are not needed by teachers. If every teacher Impacts knowledge, it is very important for them to undergo specific trainings for the proper dispatch of duties. Learning should be a continual thing for teachers, and it can be done through trainings or personal learning. The most important thing is that knowledge should be gained continually to effectively impact the lives of students positively. Trainings are needed in every career and teachers are not left out because the world evolves daily and different method of doing things are being employed as time goes on. If there is no proper and relevant trainings, the job would suffer. In the case of teachers, if proper student teaching techniques and up to date information on specific topics are not learnt, students would suffer. A couple of years ago, it was believed that too much sugar was the cause of diabetes, but as time went on we were taught that it was due to lack of insulin. A teacher who does not get right training or information on a relevant topic will mislead the students. Teachers do not necessarily need to undergo a formal training class to be able to impact knowledge. They can learn from the internet, experience and fellow colleagues. What is of importance is for teachers to keep themselves updated and informed about trends, innovations, new ways of doing things etc. In conclusion, good teachers need to undergo learnings which could be formal or informal as long as it provides needed and crucial information which is needed by students.
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training
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trainings
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teachers
. If every
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teacher
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very
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important
for them to undergo specific
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trainings
for the proper dispatch of duties.

Learning should be a continual thing for
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teachers
, and it can
be done
through
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trainings
or personal learning. The most
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important
thing is that knowledge should
be gained
continually
to
effectively
impact the
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lives
of
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students
positively
.

Trainings are
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needed
in every career and
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teachers
are not
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left
out
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because
the world evolves daily and
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different
method of doing things are
being employed
as time goes on. If there is no proper and relevant
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trainings
, the job would suffer. In the case of
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teachers
, if proper
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student
teaching techniques and up to date information on specific topics are not
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learnt
,
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students
would suffer. A couple of years ago, it
was believed
that too much sugar was the cause of diabetes,
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but
as time went on we
were taught
that it was due to lack of insulin. A
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teacher
who does not
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get
right
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training
or information on a relevant topic will mislead the students.

Teachers do not
necessarily
need to undergo a formal
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training
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class
to be able to impact knowledge. They can learn from the internet, experience and
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fellow colleagues
. What is of importance is for
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teachers
to
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keep
themselves updated and informed about trends, innovations, new ways of doing things etc.

In conclusion
,
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good
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teachers
need to undergo learnings which could be formal or informal as long as it provides
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needed
and crucial information which is
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needed
by
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students
.
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24Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes

IELTS essay Some believe that training is necessary to be a good teacher, others think that teachers don’t need a training course. v. 1

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
277 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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