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IELTS General Training - Writing Task IYou have seen an advertisement for an evening course to study a foreign language. Write a letter to the institution offering the course. In your letter ask for details of the course, ask if the course teachers are qu v.1

IELTS General Training - Writing Task IYou have seen an advertisement for an evening course to study a foreign language. Write a letter to the institution offering the course. In your letter ask for details of the course, ask if the course teachers are qu v. 1
Nowadays, that families tend to eat together less frequently has gained popularity. This essay will present some grounds for this trend and identify possible effects. The given problem can be attributed to two main reasons. To begin with, people have become busier and busier with their hectic schedules and heavy workloads in our fast-paced society. Consequently, sitting down with their family members might not be a convenient choice. Instead, these individuals frequently eat out with their peers, colleagues or business partners near their school or workplace, which can fit their schedule more. On top of that, the fast food culture of modern life can change people’s eating habits given that fast foods have become ubiquitous in most countries, especially developed countries like America. For example, youngsters in Vietnam often grab a quick meal after a busy day at work or school, which leads them to skipping meals with their family when going home. The trend has both positive and negative influence on citizens. In terms of benefits, people are able to be much more flexible with their time. They will not have to show up at a fixed hour to have meals with their family and can eat whenever and whatever they want. However, in terms of the downside, this can lead to a weaker family bond. If a family continuously eats separately, family members might not be able to show their thoughts, feelings with one another, and therefore may feel isolated from each other. This will result in a lack of deep family connection. In summary, for the aforementioned arguments, the tendency of family members not gathering at meals is mainly because of the difference in their schedules or the preference to eat fast food, which can have both positive and negative impacts.
Nowadays, that
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eat
together less
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has gained popularity. This essay will present
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some
grounds for this trend and identify possible effects.

The
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given
problem can
be attributed
to two main reasons. To
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begin
with,
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people
have become busier and busier with their hectic schedules and heavy workloads in our
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fast
-paced society.
Consequently
, sitting down with their
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family
members might not be a convenient choice.
Instead
, these individuals
frequently
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eat
out with their peers, colleagues or business partners near their school or workplace, which can fit their schedule more.
On top of that
, the
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fast
food culture of modern life can
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change
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people
’s eating habits
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given
that
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fast
foods have become ubiquitous in most countries,
especially
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developed countries
like America.
For example
, youngsters in Vietnam
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often
grab a quick
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meal
after a busy day at work or school, which leads them to skipping
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meals
with their
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family
when going home.

The trend has both
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positive
and
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negative
influence on citizens. In terms of benefits,
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people
are able to be much more flexible with their time. They will not
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have to
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show
up at a
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fixed
hour to have
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meals
with their
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family
and can
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eat
whenever and whatever they want.
However
, in terms of the downside, this can lead to a weaker
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family
bond. If a
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family
continuously
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eats
separately
,
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family
members might not be able to
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show
their thoughts, feelings with one another, and
therefore
may feel isolated from each other. This will result in a lack of deep
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family
connection.

In summary, for the aforementioned arguments, the tendency of
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family
members not gathering at
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meals
is
mainly
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because
of the difference in their schedules or the preference to
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eat
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fast
food, which can have both
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positive
and
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negative
impacts.
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7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes

IELTS essay IELTS General Training - Writing Task IYou have seen an advertisement for an evening course to study a foreign language. Write a letter to the institution offering the course. In your letter ask for details of the course, ask if the course teachers are qu v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
294 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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