There is no doubt that most pupils want to be academically successful in their lives. Although some believe that this success is highly dependent on their teachers, I would argue that it is dependent on their own attitude.
On the one hand, people who believe in dominance of quality of teaching in a child's accomplishment might argue that a teacher can make or break a student's life. This is because the children can easily get influenced by their mentors and follow them. For instance, if a teacher teaches the advantages of smoking instead of its detrimental effects, the number of smoking students will potentially grow. In the contrast, if the children are not motivated by teachers, it would become difficult for them to find the motivation to learn and attend classes at the educational institutes.
On the other hand, I opine that a child's own attitude is an indispensable ingredient for their successful academic life because self-motivation is highly essential. For example, if a child does not have any interest in excelling in their studies, no one can change their perspective and motivate them. This is due to the reason that it is significant that a student's mind is ready of all challenges related to any subject. Additionally, I think that no growth can be made if a person have a negative attitude towards something.
In conclusion, while some argue about the importance of good teaching techniques as teachers can largely influence their pupils, I firmly believe that a student's own determination is the most prominent thing that leads to their success.
There is no doubt that most pupils want to be
academically
successful in their
lives
. Although
some
believe that this success is
highly
dependent on their
teachers
, I would argue that it is dependent on their
own
attitude.
On the one hand,
people
who believe in dominance of quality of teaching in a child's accomplishment might argue that a
teacher
can
make
or break a student's life. This is
because
the children can
easily
get
influenced by their mentors and follow them.
For instance
, if a
teacher
teaches the advantages of smoking
instead
of its detrimental effects, the number of smoking students will
potentially
grow. In the contrast, if the children are not motivated by
teachers
, it would become difficult for them to find the motivation to learn and attend classes at the educational institutes.
On the other hand
, I opine that a child's
own
attitude is an indispensable ingredient for their successful academic life
because
self-motivation is
highly
essential.
For example
, if a child does not have any interest in excelling in their studies, no one can
change
their perspective and motivate them. This is due to the reason that it is significant that a student's mind is ready of all challenges related to any subject.
Additionally
, I
think
that no growth can
be made
if a person have a
negative
attitude towards something.
In conclusion
, while
some
argue about the importance of
good
teaching techniques as
teachers
can
largely
influence their pupils, I
firmly
believe that a student's
own
determination is the most prominent thing that leads to their success.
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