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Some believe that lot of scientific research is a waste of time and money. To what extent do you agree or disagree? v.1

Some believe that lot of scientific research is a waste of time and money. v. 1
In today' s era, research is the one of the significant facets which has changed the fate of many countries. The research on various life changing topics is the result of sheer determination and hard work of impeccable work of scientists. However, many opine that scientific research is merely a waste of time and money. I completely disagree with this statement. To begin with, the image of modern world can never be possible without the contribution of many researches. The world can never move ahead, if there will not be any research. Hence, scientific research has brought many unprecedented changes for the welfare of humankind. Firstly, earlier, there were myriad fatal viruses, and diseases, which acted as a curse for humankind as a result many people were dying owing to several epidemics, but with the arrival of accurate scientific researches, all the dangerous epidemics have been eradicated to a large extent, and thereby these researches prove as a boon for humankind. Secondly, the research contributes immensely in providing different essential tools and machinery which in turn indirectly make any country developed in this world of competition. For instance, it has been found that America spent a major portion of its economy on scientific research, on account of which, it is known as a super power. Meanwhile, every research is an outcome of intense practice and patience, which is ensured by the hard-work of scientists. Furthermore, It will be unfair to talk about money and time, when it comes to research because research is necessary for any country to be more innovative, and for providing lavish lifestyle to the people and the things which were seemed implausible now have become a common sight for the people due to myriad inventions. Therefore, it is completely an appropriate to invest money on research and researches are deemed as a cure of many intractable problem which signifies that no research means no development in any aspect of area. In conclusion, I opine that every country should focus on research and innovation, as it ultimately brings humongous fruitful outcomes in people' s life.
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research
is the one of the significant facets which has
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changed
the fate of
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many
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countries
. The
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research
on various life changing topics is the result of sheer determination and
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hard
work of impeccable work of scientists.
However
,
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many
opine that
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scientific
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research
is
merely
a waste of time and money. I completely disagree with this statement.

To
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begin
with, the image of modern world can never be possible without the contribution of
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many
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researches
. The world can never
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move
ahead, if there will not be any
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research
.
Hence
,
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scientific
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research
has brought
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many
unprecedented
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changes
for the welfare of humankind.
Firstly
, earlier, there were myriad fatal viruses, and diseases, which acted as a curse for humankind
as a result
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many
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people
were dying owing to several epidemics,
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but
with the arrival of accurate
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scientific
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researches
, all the
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dangerous
epidemics have
been eradicated
to a large extent, and thereby these
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researches
prove as a boon for humankind.
Secondly
, the
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research
contributes
immensely
in providing
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different
essential tools and machinery which in turn
indirectly
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make
any
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country
developed in this world of competition.
For instance
, it has
been found
that America spent a major portion of its economy on
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
scientific
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research
, on account of which, it
is known
as a super power.

Meanwhile, every
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research
is an outcome of intense practice and patience, which
is ensured
by the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
hard
-work of scientists.
Furthermore
, It will be unfair to talk about money and time, when it
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comes
to
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research
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because
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research
is necessary for any
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country
to be more innovative, and for providing lavish lifestyle to the
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people
and the things which
were seemed
implausible
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now
have become a common sight for the
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people
due to myriad inventions.
Therefore
, it is completely an appropriate to invest money on
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research
and
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researches
are deemed
as a cure of
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many
intractable problem which signifies that no
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research
means no development in any aspect of area.

In conclusion
, I opine that every
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country
should focus on
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
research
and innovation, as it
ultimately
brings humongous fruitful outcomes in
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people&
#039; s life.
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29Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay Some believe that lot of scientific research is a waste of time and money. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
348 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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