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Some believe that it is the responsibility of people to take care of the environment. Others say it is the government that should take care of the environment. Discuss both views and give your opinion v.1

Some believe that it is the responsibility of people to take care of the environment. Others say it is the government that should take care of the environment. 1
There has been a persistent increase in environmental problems since the last decade. Air pollution and water pollution have become major concerns for people as well as governments around the globe. Some individuals think that it is the accountability of people to safeguard our environment. However, others feel that the government should take appropriate actions to save our environment from various pollutants. This essay will discuss both views and why people and governments are responsible for ensuring the safety of the environment. To begin with, governments have all the power to ensure a sustainable environment. Since governments can formulate new regulations, they can maintain appropriate levels of air and water pollutions. For example, the Indian government has issued an advisory to automobile industries to abide by BS-VI emission standards by 2020. It will reduce carbon emissions from vehicles that run on fossil fuels and will help to lower air pollution. Conversely, some people think that we all are responsible for the protection of our environment. They usually have the reason that if people become aware of their duties towards the environment, then they will prefer to live in a way that will not harm the environment. They will educate their friends and family members as well. For instance, according to a survey published in The Tribune newspaper, 70% of urban people have stopped using plastic bags while purchasing goods from their markets. Therefore, people should be accountable to ensure a safe environment. In my opinion, it is significantly crucial that both people and governments should coordinate with each other for the betterment of our environment. Individuals should not only respect and follow different regulations set up by their respective governments for environmental safety but also opt environment- friendly lifestyles.
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people
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governments
around the globe.
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individuals
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think
that it is the accountability of
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people
to safeguard our
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environment
.
However
, others feel that the
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government
should take appropriate actions to save our
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environment
from various pollutants. This essay will discuss both views and why
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people
and
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governments
are responsible for ensuring the safety of the environment.

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begin
with,
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governments
have all the power to ensure a sustainable
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environment
. Since
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governments
can formulate new regulations, they can maintain appropriate levels of air and water pollutions.
For example
, the Indian
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government
has issued an advisory to automobile industries to abide by BS-VI emission standards by 2020. It will
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reduce
carbon emissions from vehicles that run on fossil fuels and will
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help
to lower air pollution.

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,
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people
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think
that we all are responsible for the protection of our
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environment
. They
usually
have the reason that if
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people
become aware of their duties towards the
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environment
, then they will prefer to
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live
in a way that will not harm the
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environment
. They will educate their friends and family members
as well
.
For instance
, according to a survey published in The Tribune newspaper, 70% of urban
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people
have
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stopped
using plastic bags while purchasing
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goods
from their markets.
Therefore
,
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people
should be accountable to ensure a safe environment.

In my opinion, it is
significantly
crucial that both
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people
and
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governments
should coordinate with each other for the betterment of our
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environment
. Individuals should not
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only
respect and follow
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different
regulations set up by their respective
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governments
for environmental safety
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but
also
opt
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environment-
friendly lifestyles.
12Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
24Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Mistakes
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IELTS essay Some believe that it is the responsibility of people to take care of the environment. Others say it is the government that should take care of the environment. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
289 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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