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Some are of the opinion that people are naturally born as good leaders while others feel that leadership skills can be learned. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. v.1

Some are of the opinion that people are naturally born as good leaders while others feel that leadership skills can be learned. v. 1
Productive leadership is considered as an inextricable element in prosperous businesses or even in a pioneer society. People, however, have different views about effectiveness of inherent talents as opposed to acquiring practical knowledge in order to create a successful leader. While natural abilities pave the way for individuals to become a thriving leader, knowledge and experience are of more paramount importance. There is a little room for doubt that innate capabilities play pivotal role in creating great leaders. Needless to say, possessing high level of interpersonal intelligence, some individuals are more potent to turn into prominent leaders compared to others. Interpersonal intelligence is regarded as a natural ability which assist people to interact with others effectively and comprehend their complicated emotions accurately. Also, these people are able to cope with challenging problems and are more likely to mitigate unpredictable situations. Consequently, natural knacks, like interpersonal intelligence and other relevant forms of intelligence, should not be underestimated. Nevertheless, I am inclined to believe that applied knowledge and acquiring practical experiences are more efficient in bringing about top leaders. Hardly could anybody achieve extraordinary leadership qualities without learning technical skills in various fields. Imagine an intelligent football coach lacking sufficient experiences in real competitions, as an illustration; Under this circumstance, even though he probably is able to manage players in primitive levels, more sophisticated situations would definitely reveal conspicuous lack of his adequate experiences and knowledge. By this, confronting challenging conditions and, in turn, overcoming more complex difficulties undoubtedly require a discerning leader who possesses precious experiences and applied knowledge. Natural aptitudes, in short, can function as a catalyst for individuals to achieve high qualities of leadership. Yet, it can be rationally concluded that in the absence of learning viable knowledge and gaining valuable experiences, inherent talents are not able to create a flourishing leader on their own.
Productive leadership
is considered
as an inextricable element in prosperous businesses or even in a pioneer society.
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People
,
however
, have
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different
views about effectiveness of inherent talents as opposed to acquiring practical
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knowledge
in order to create a successful
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leader
. While natural abilities pave the way for individuals to become a thriving
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leader
,
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knowledge
and
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experience
are of more paramount importance.

There is a
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little
room for doubt that innate capabilities play pivotal role in creating great
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leaders
. Needless to say, possessing high level of interpersonal
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intelligence
,
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some
individuals are more potent to turn into prominent
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leaders
compared to others. Interpersonal
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intelligence
is regarded
as a natural ability which assist
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people
to interact with others
effectively
and comprehend their complicated emotions
accurately
.
Also
, these
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people
are able to cope with challenging problems and are more likely to mitigate unpredictable situations.
Consequently
, natural knacks, like interpersonal
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intelligence
and other relevant forms of
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intelligence
, should not
be underestimated
.

Nevertheless
, I
am inclined
to believe that applied
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
knowledge
and acquiring practical
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
experiences
are more efficient in bringing about top
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
leaders
. Hardly could anybody achieve extraordinary leadership qualities without learning technical
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
in various fields. Imagine an intelligent football coach lacking sufficient
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
experiences
in real competitions, as an illustration; Under this circumstance,
even though
he
probably
is able to manage players in primitive levels, more sophisticated situations would definitely reveal conspicuous lack of his adequate
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
experiences
and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
knowledge
. By this, confronting challenging conditions and, in turn, overcoming more complex difficulties
undoubtedly
require a discerning
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
leader
who possesses precious
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
experiences
and applied knowledge.

Natural aptitudes, in short, can function as a catalyst for individuals to achieve high qualities of leadership.
Yet
, it can be
rationally
concluded that in the absence of learning viable
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
knowledge
and gaining valuable
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
experiences
, inherent talents are not able to create a flourishing
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
leader
on their
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
22Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay Some are of the opinion that people are naturally born as good leaders while others feel that leadership skills can be learned. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
306 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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