With the spread of internet and technology, social media has become a vital part of our life. Sites such as Facebook, Instagram and Twitter are gaining popularity not only among the youth but also older age groups. With this being said, critics are arguing that these sites provide a channel for criminal activity and hence have more disadvantages than advantages.
Cyber bullying justifies the negatives associated with social media. Although punishable by law, it is a very common form of internet crime. Spreading hate, mockery and publicly embarrassing the victim against his will has serious mental impacts and in many cases also leads to depression and social anxiety. Moreover, the privacy policies of such sites, especially Facebook, poses some critical issues to the safety of private information. Facebook, for example, had a significant security breach in 2013 which led to a large amount of personal information ending up in the wrong hands, some of which criminals too.
Be that as it may, these networking applications have transformed the world of communication for good, thereby making confabulations convenient, effortless and almost free of charge. Speaking to your grandmother in another corner of the world does not cost an arm and a leg and can be done with one tap now. Furthermore, being good sources of entertainment and interaction, they have spread information beyond the limits of the universe that otherwise would have taken years to disperse. In addition, these platforms are central to numerous social, political and ethical discussions. The environmental crisis, for example, is gaining more momentum on Instagram than in real life. This exchange of ideas has integrated the world and benefitted millions.
In conclusion, even though social media has some negative connotations, I disagree that social networking sites have more negative effects than positive. It is clear that the benefits that these sites have provided us with are irreplaceable and as for the problems associated with them, we can always take measures to minimise or eliminate them. 
With the spread of internet and technology,  
social
 media has become a vital part of our life.  
Sites
 such as Facebook, Instagram and Twitter are gaining popularity not  
only
 among the youth  
but
  also
 older age groups. With this  
being said
, critics are arguing that these  
sites
 provide a channel for criminal activity and  
hence
 have more disadvantages than advantages. 
Cyber bullying
 justifies the negatives associated with  
social
 media. Although punishable by law, it is a  
very
 common form of internet crime. Spreading hate, mockery and  
publicly
 embarrassing the victim against his will has serious mental impacts and in  
many
 cases  
also
 leads to depression and  
social
 anxiety.  
Moreover
, the privacy policies of such  
sites
,  
especially
 Facebook, poses  
some
 critical issues to the safety of private information. Facebook,  
for example
, had a significant security breach in 2013 which led to a large amount of personal information ending up in the  
wrong
 hands,  
some
 of which criminals too.
Be that as it may, these networking applications have transformed the world of communication for  
good
, thereby making confabulations convenient, effortless and almost free of charge. Speaking to your grandmother in another corner of the world does not cost an arm and a leg and can  
be done
 with one tap  
now
.  
Furthermore
, being  
good
 sources of entertainment and interaction, they have spread information beyond the limits of the universe that  
otherwise
 would have taken years to disperse.  
In addition
, these platforms are central to numerous  
social
, political and ethical discussions. The environmental crisis,  
for example
, is gaining more momentum on Instagram than in real life. This exchange of  
ideas
 has integrated the world and  
benefitted
 millions. 
In conclusion
,  
even though
  social
 media has  
some
  negative
 connotations, I disagree that  
social
 networking  
sites
 have more  
negative
 effects than  
positive
. It is  
clear
 that the benefits that these  
sites
 have provided us with are irreplaceable and as for the problems associated with them, we can always take measures to  
minimise
 or eliminate them.