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Smacking children is the best form of discipline. To what extent do you agree or disagree? v.14

Smacking children is the best form of discipline. v. 14
In old times, Corporal punishment used to be the way of disciplining a child. However, in this era of modernization this punishment is still popular. Some people are of opinion, it is the best way to create discipline among the kids. This essay will discuss why physical punishment is not a good option to make them regime. To embark on, parents believe that smacking children will make them known how to behave with others. For example, a decade ago people used to beat their juvenile so that they don't make the same mistake again. Thus, for a period of time kids will not repeat that in fear of getting punished. Due to which make the parents think of slapping their children is the best way to raise them as a good human being. Despite all of this, hitting children is not good as it has great impact on their mental health, performance and personality. For instance, if you slap the juvenile once in the fear he will not to do that again, but at long run he or she will become aggressive by nature which is not good, also they will start hiding things even if they will be in big problem they never let their guardians know about that which sometimes lead to aloof nature, even lead to low self esteem and create depression problems at an earlier stage. Thus, it's pivotal to teach kids how to behave, but hitting them is not the solution. As children a lot from their respective house so parents should always put great impressions on the minds of children otherwise it will be too late to correct them in the future. There should be a strict trial against guardians as in foreign countries if you slap your youth cops will come and arrest you. Therefore, it is must for guardians, not to physically punish the juvenile. In a nutshell, As the saying goes Giving respect get respect one must raise their children through love and respect to get back the same. There should banned at smacking and people should be punished who doesn't follow the rule.
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old
times, Corporal punishment
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used
to be the way of disciplining a child.
However
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Some
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people
are of opinion, it is the best way to create discipline among the kids. This essay will discuss why physical punishment is not a
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good
option to
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make
them regime.

To embark on, parents believe that smacking
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children
will
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make
them known how to behave with others.
For example
, a decade ago
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people
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used
to beat their juvenile
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so
that they don't
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make
the same mistake again.
Thus
, for a period of time kids will not repeat that in fear of getting punished. Due to which
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make
the parents
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think
of slapping their
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children
is the best way to raise them as a
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good
human being.

Despite all of this, hitting
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children
is not
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good
as it has great impact on their mental health, performance and personality.
For instance
, if you slap the juvenile once in the fear he will not to do that again,
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but
at long run he or she will become aggressive by nature which is not
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good
,
also
they will
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start
hiding things even if they will be in
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big
problem they never
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let
their guardians know about that which
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sometimes
lead to aloof nature, even lead to low
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self esteem
and create depression problems at an earlier stage.
Thus
, it's pivotal to teach kids how to behave,
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but
hitting them is not the solution. As
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children
a lot from their respective
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house
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so
parents should always put great impressions on the minds of
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children
otherwise
it will be too late to correct them in the future. There should be a strict trial against guardians as in foreign countries if you slap your youth cops will
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come
and arrest you.
Therefore
, it is
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must
for guardians, not to
physically
punish the juvenile.

In a nutshell, As the saying goes Giving respect
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get
respect one
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must
raise their
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children
through
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love
and respect to
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get
back the same. There should
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banned
at smacking and
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people
should
be punished
who doesn't follow the
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rule
.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes

IELTS essay Smacking children is the best form of discipline. v. 14

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
353 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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