some people think that people can be encouraged to take up sport through sporting events such as Olympics. However, others think that there are better ways to encourage adults to do exercise. discuss both views and give your opinion. v.1
some people think that people can be encouraged to take up sport through sporting events such as Olympics. However, others think that there are better ways to encourage adults to do exercise. v. 1
It is thought by some that major sporting events such as the Olympics encourage people to do sports while there are others who consider that adults can be motivated to engage in exercises in other ways. In my opinion, I strongly agree with the latter.
If we consider the benefits of having sporting events to encourage adults to do sports, firstly, people can be easily motivated and inspire by letting them see the actual success of the world-class sportsman and their exiting way of living. Moreover, a healthy and active lifestyle of such personals is a promising factor to motivate adults. For example, their well-formed bodies and recognition the stars receiving all over the world can ignite the passion for sports and exercise in many. If there are no chances for people to experience such events, people cannot see and feel the actual benefits of sports and healthy life. Secondly, not only adults but also children get inspired and as a result, in the future, they will automatically adapt to a healthy and active lifestyle.
On the other hand, we should take into account that holding such event in a country is an extremely expensive task, as well as not many, can even afford to buy tickets to see such event. Instead, governments can use that money to advance existing sporting facilities, building new facilities and promoting sports. In addition, to increase enthusiasm, governments can reduce the prices of healthy foods such as organic diets and sports equipment. Conversely, people are always thinking about money when it comes to involving in any sport or activity, therefore, it is more beneficial to offer the financial benefits to people without wasting exponential amount of money to host sporting events. As a matter of fact, to motivate an adult to do something new, money plays a profound role.
In conclusion, although there are some benefits of having prime sporting events, the proper investment of money to develop sporting facilities and giving financial advantages to people are more effective.
It is
thought
by
some
that major sporting
events
such as the Olympics encourage
people
to do
sports
while there are others who consider that
adults
can
be motivated
to engage in exercises in other ways. In my opinion, I
strongly
agree
with the latter.
If we consider the
benefits
of having sporting
events
to encourage
adults
to do
sports
,
firstly
,
people
can be
easily
motivated and inspire by letting them
see
the actual success of the world-
class
sportsman and their exiting way of living.
Moreover
, a
healthy
and active lifestyle of such personals is a promising factor to motivate
adults
.
For example
, their well-formed bodies and recognition the stars receiving all over the world can ignite the passion for
sports
and exercise in
many
. If there are no chances for
people
to experience such
events
,
people
cannot
see
and feel the actual
benefits
of
sports
and
healthy
life.
Secondly
, not
only
adults
but
also
children
get
inspired and
as a result
, in the future, they will
automatically
adapt to a
healthy
and active lifestyle.
On the other hand
, we should take into account that holding such
event
in a country is an
extremely
expensive task,
as well
as not
many
, can even afford to
buy
tickets to
see
such
event
.
Instead
,
governments
can
use
that
money
to advance existing sporting facilities, building new facilities and promoting
sports
.
In addition
, to increase enthusiasm,
governments
can
reduce
the prices of
healthy
foods such as organic diets and
sports
equipment.
Conversely
,
people
are always thinking about
money
when it
comes
to involving in any
sport
or activity,
therefore
, it is more beneficial to offer the financial
benefits
to
people
without wasting exponential amount of
money
to host sporting
events
. As a matter of fact, to motivate an adult to do something new,
money
plays a profound role.
In conclusion
, although there are
some
benefits
of having prime sporting
events
, the proper investment of
money
to develop sporting facilities and giving financial advantages to
people
are more effective.
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7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes