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Smacking children is the best form of discipline. To what extent do you agree or disagree? v.10

Smacking children is the best form of discipline. v. 10
Maintaining discipline in children is challenging for many parents. Some parents believe that punishing children for their mistake is the best way to make them behave with proper. This essay will argue why smacking a child is never the right way to instil discipline in them. One the one hand, some parents think that punishing children for mistake will make them more disciplined. They punished their children for wrong doing, thinking that they will not repeat the same thing again and again because of afraid of getting punished. Indeed, there are some cases where children maintain more disciplined after getting punished because of fear. These few instances have bolstered people thinking of instilling discipline in children by punishing them. Despite the short term effect of instilling discipline in children, punishing will never be the best way to make a child disciplined. In fact, punishment may affect their mental behaviour, making them more violence. There are many different ways to teach children to remain in the discipline like dealing the problem with a more polite manner, handling their mistakes with love instead of flagging them. This type of behaviour will surely make them more discipline in the long run. To conclude, this essay argued that even though there is a short term effect of punishment in maintaining discipline. However, there are more relevant ways to make children discipline for a long run. In my opinion, Child discipline can be maintained efficiently with love, care and handling their problems or mistakes in a polite manner.
Maintaining
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discipline
in
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children
is challenging for
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many
parents.
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parents believe that
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punishing
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children
for their
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mistake
is the best
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way
to
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make
them behave with proper. This essay will argue why smacking a child is never the right
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way
to
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instil
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discipline
in them.

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the one hand,
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some
parents
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think
that
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punishing
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children
for
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mistake
will
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make
them more disciplined. They punished their
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children
for
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wrong
doing, thinking that they will not repeat the same thing again and again
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because
of afraid of getting punished.
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, there are
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some
cases where
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children
maintain more disciplined after getting punished
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because
of fear. These few instances have bolstered
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people
thinking of instilling
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discipline
in
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children
by
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punishing
them.

Despite the short term effect of instilling
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discipline
in
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children
,
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punishing
will never be the best
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way
to
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make
a child disciplined. In fact, punishment may affect their mental
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behaviour
, making them more violence. There are
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many
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different
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ways
to teach
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children
to remain in the
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discipline
like dealing the problem with a more polite manner, handling their
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mistakes
with
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love
instead
of flagging them. This type of
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behaviour
will
surely
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make
them more
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discipline
in the long run.

To conclude
, this essay argued that
even though
there is a short term effect of punishment in maintaining
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discipline
.
However
, there are more relevant
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ways
to
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make
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children
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discipline
for a long run. In my opinion, Child
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discipline
can
be maintained
efficiently
with
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love
, care and handling their problems or
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mistakes
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in a polite manner
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IELTS essay Smacking children is the best form of discipline. v. 10

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
253 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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