should physical education be optional in school or not? v.1
should physical education be optional in school or not? v. 1
There are different opinions about physical education all around the globe. This can be because of the differences in culture, traditions and needs of a country. There are many arguments in terms of academics and physical education. Most of the claims academics to be more important for school age children.
Obesity is one of the major drawbacks of the modern world. Major reason for obesity is due to the lack of physical activities performed by the children. There are hardly any safe places for the kids to play outside and too much time spent with the kids on mobile phones and computer games are caused by this. Therefore, there is a greater need than ever before to have children to spent time at school doing physical activities. Furthermore, many studies prove that, physical education also helps improve the academic performances. Besides, all children might not be academically skilled. Hence, they should be given a chance to choose a vocation other than academia.
On the other hand, every country needs labours in the technical, educational and medical field as well. Therefore, need for academics cannot be ruled out as a whole. It is essential for a growing up child to sustain in today’s world.
To conclude, I suggest physical education and academics should go hand in hand to have a balanced curriculum. However, we cannot make a child a teacher or sports person unless he wishes to do so. Thus, let the child have the opportunity to decide what is best for him along with physical education to stay healthy and still be well-educated.
There are
different
opinions about
physical
education
all around the globe. This can be
because
of the differences in culture, traditions and
needs
of a country. There are
many
arguments in terms of
academics
and
physical
education
. Most of the claims
academics
to be more
important
for school age children.
Obesity is one of the major drawbacks of the modern world. Major reason for obesity is due to the lack of
physical
activities performed by the children. There are hardly any safe places for the kids to play outside and too much time spent with the kids on mobile phones and computer games
are caused
by this.
Therefore
, there is a greater
need
than ever
before
to have children to spent time at school doing
physical
activities.
Furthermore
,
many
studies prove that,
physical
education
also
helps
improve
the
academic
performances.
Besides
, all children might not be
academically
skilled.
Hence
, they should be
given
a chance to choose a vocation other than academia.
On the other hand
, every country
needs
labours
in the technical, educational and medical field
as well
.
Therefore
,
need
for
academics
cannot
be ruled
out as a whole. It is essential for a growing up child to sustain in
today
’s world.
To conclude
, I suggest
physical
education
and
academics
should go hand in hand to have a balanced curriculum.
However
, we cannot
make
a child a teacher or sports person unless he wishes to do
so
.
Thus
,
let
the child have the opportunity to decide what is best for him along with
physical
education
to stay healthy and
still
be well-educated.
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