There are different approaches by which criminals can be punished. Although the prisons have been considered as a severe punishment, they cannot be quite effective as many as the education and job training. It appears that both the education and training are most efficient. I will explain why in this essay.
Firstly, the governments can employ the criminals in various positions meaning that those who commit a crime usually need to learn how to use their skills and abilities in a correct way. Thus, if the states spend the maintenance of prisons' costs on educating criminals, the criminals will be able to change into individuals who are more beneficial to their societies. In addition, a second and perhaps most significant benefit of the training and employing them as workforces is that the governments can implement some projects such as community services with no extra expenditure. This means that criminals must do these types of projects instead of staying in the prison. As a result they do not have to be paid the salary because it is just their penalty.
It is true that for some crimes such as murder should be considered severe penalties so that it can be said that the education is not efficient in order to punish them. Despite this, it seems that according to some research, those who just have been sentenced for sending to prison would often commit the same crime after coming back to societies. This is because they mostly need to be taught about how they can have a normal lifestyle like others.
To conclude, the prisons have been considered as a method to deal with criminals. However, it seems to me that considering some centers in which criminals could be educated about different types of job according to their abilities can be more beneficial.
There are
different
approaches by which
criminals
can
be punished
. Although the
prisons
have
been considered
as a severe punishment, they cannot be quite effective as
many
as the education and job training. It appears that both the education and training are most efficient. I will
explain
why in this essay.
Firstly
, the
governments
can employ the
criminals
in various positions meaning that those who commit a crime
usually
need to learn how to
use
their
skills
and abilities
in a correct way
.
Thus
, if the states spend the maintenance of
prisons&
#039; costs on educating
criminals
, the
criminals
will be able to
change
into individuals who are more beneficial to their societies.
In addition
, a second and perhaps most significant benefit of the training and employing them as
workforces
is that the
governments
can implement
some
projects such as community services with no extra expenditure. This means that
criminals
must
do these types of projects
instead
of staying in the
prison
.
As a result
they do not
have to
be paid
the salary
because
it is
just
their penalty.
It is true that for
some
crimes such as murder should
be considered
severe penalties
so
that it can
be said
that the education is not efficient in order to punish them. Despite this, it seems that according to
some
research, those who
just
have
been sentenced
for sending to
prison
would
often
commit the same crime after coming back to societies. This is
because
they
mostly
need to
be taught
about how they can have a normal lifestyle like others.
To conclude
, the
prisons
have
been considered
as a method to deal with
criminals
.
However
, it seems to me that considering
some
centers in which
criminals
could
be educated
about
different
types of job according to their abilities can be more beneficial.
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