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Some scientists think that there are intelligent life forms on other planets and message should be sent out to contact them. Others think that it is a bad idea and would be dangerous. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. v.2

Some scientists think that there are intelligent life forms on other planets and message should be sent out to contact them. Others think that it is a bad idea and would be dangerous. v. 2
The age old debate of contacting an alien life has separated the scientific community. Many believe that intelligent races live across the universe and we should send them a signal about our existence, while others have opposite view and feel this will put the human race in jeopardy. In this essay, both aspects of this argument will be looked upon in detail along with my opinion of not making a quick effort to meet the life forms outside our planet. Space researchers positively anticipate the existence lives other than the Earth as the universe is filled with billions of stars and theoretical evidences and calculations prove of hypothesis. However, this can be assured only if we can communicate even with one species out of many. This can bring us the chance to learn and know about other races and maybe we can overcome our dire issues of hunger, poverty, global warming and increasing population. Although, contacting the aliens is not as safe as it sounds, this step can wipe out the whole human race along with other life forms on our planet, and this is what worries other people in scientific community. It cannot be denied that intelligent space race will reject our friendship and other danger is that they make attack us for resources available on Earth, millions of consequences can be guessed. It is will be a great risk to contact outsiders in hope of friendship and then facing unavoidable ramifications. In conclusion, sending a message to smart species living on the other planets can help us solving out serious issues and change the fate of humanity, but this comes with a risk of being encountered by intelligent enemies which can wipe us off from the face of earth. So after looking into both sides of argument, I believe that human race should not contact the intelligent species immediately but with caution.
The age
old
debate of contacting an alien life has separated the scientific community.
Many
believe that
intelligent
races
live
across the
universe and
we should
send
them a signal about our existence, while others have opposite view and feel this will put the human
race
in jeopardy. In this essay, both aspects of this argument will
be looked
upon in detail along with my opinion of not making a quick effort to
meet
the life forms outside our planet.

Space researchers
positively
anticipate the existence
lives
other
than the Earth as the universe
is filled
with billions of stars and theoretical evidences and calculations prove of hypothesis.
However
, this can
be assured
only
if we can communicate even with one species out of
many
. This can bring us the chance to learn and know about
other
races
and maybe we can overcome our dire issues of hunger, poverty, global warming and increasing population.

Although, contacting the aliens is not as safe as it sounds, this step can wipe out the whole human
race
along with
other
life forms on our planet, and this is what worries
other
people
in scientific community. It cannot
be denied
that
intelligent
space
race
will reject our friendship and
other
danger
is that they
make
attack us for resources available on Earth, millions of consequences can
be guessed
. It is will be a great
risk
to contact outsiders in hope of friendship and then facing unavoidable ramifications.

In conclusion
, sending a message to smart species living on the
other
planets can
help
us
solving
out serious issues and
change
the fate of humanity,
but
this
comes
with a
risk
of
being encountered
by
intelligent
enemies which can wipe us off from the face of earth.
So
after looking into both sides of argument, I believe that human
race
should not contact the
intelligent
species immediately
but
with caution.
2Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
16Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes

IELTS essay Some scientists think that there are intelligent life forms on other planets and message should be sent out to contact them. Others think that it is a bad idea and would be dangerous. v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
314 words
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