In modern society every experts have a its own weighting. Some group of people believes that science experts has a more valued compared to artists. But I think in a reverse manner and my arguments are explained in the ensuing paragraphs.
Science and technology are more essential in modern society. New discoveries in the field of technology is required to build the statues of notion across the world. Firstly, due to development in science and technology will result in increased the medical facility in the country. Furthermore, development in technology is also noticeable because many countries earn wealth by selling the technology another notion which does not have a resource for research and development. Society gives more respect to scientists because their discovery is directly related to the common public.
Contribution of artist and musician have an equal importance in society. The basic role of a musician is to entertain the public. Entertainment is a basic necessity in a busy life because they released the stress and
Feel relaxed. Arrange a live performance of world famous musicians to attract the tourist across the world which increase the earning for the tourist industries.
To conclude, scientist and artists both have an equal importance in society because scientist may help for smooth life style with new innovation in technology while artists help us to release our stress sometimes, which is becoming an essential parameter for heart diseases.
In modern
society
every
experts
have a its
own
weighting.
Some
group of
people
believes that science experts has a more valued compared to
artists
.
But
I
think
in a reverse manner
and my arguments are
explained
in the ensuing paragraphs.
Science and
technology
are more essential in modern
society
. New discoveries in the field of
technology
is required
to build the statues of notion across the world.
Firstly
, due to development in science and
technology
will result in increased the medical facility in the country.
Furthermore
, development in
technology
is
also
noticeable
because
many
countries earn wealth by selling the
technology
another notion which does not have a resource for research and development.
Society
gives more respect to scientists
because
their discovery is
directly
related to the common public.
Contribution of
artist
and musician have an equal importance in
society
. The basic role of a musician is to entertain the public. Entertainment is a basic necessity in a busy life
because
they released the
stress
and
Feel relaxed. Arrange a
live
performance of world
famous
musicians to attract the tourist across the world which increase the earning for the tourist industries.
To conclude
, scientist and
artists
both have an equal importance in
society
because
scientist may
help
for smooth life style with new innovation in
technology
while
artists
help
us to release our
stress
sometimes
, which is becoming an essential parameter for heart diseases.
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