The development of technology is projected to increase every year. Advancement in science can make it possible for people to live a century or even a couple of centuries. This essay will discuss about the both sides of the argument and my opinion on those views.
Firstly, development in science leads to the improvement of life expectancy of an average human and helps to face any dangerous diseases. Although many people prefer to live for centuries, this leads to imbalance of environment. For instance, when an average person tends to live for more than a century, it leads to over population throughout the world and results to drought for food and other resources. So, there will be a huge damage to the economy and other species.
In contrast, some people believe that it is good for the people if we develop a technology which helps to extend our lives. For example, we can spend our time with our great grandchildren and we also use new technology in the future. Living till the future makes a person work less and it can threat to human life. Although we have lived for 100 years, but nature does no support to these processes and kills many people by disasters namely, earthquakes, Tsunami.
In conclusion, by discussing the both sides of the argument in the above aforementioned points, it is easy to live for years by technology but it creates many problems and imbalance in nature. In my humble opinion, Everyone should spend their life naturally without the use of science and many great scientists, people should live for years because of their research and new inventions.
The development of
technology
is projected
to increase every
year
. Advancement in science can
make
it possible for
people
to
live
a century or even a couple of
centuries
. This essay will
discuss about the
both sides of the argument and my opinion on those views.
Firstly
, development in science leads to the improvement of life expectancy of an average human and
helps
to face any
dangerous
diseases. Although
many
people
prefer to
live
for
centuries
, this leads to imbalance of environment.
For instance
, when an average person tends to
live
for more than a century, it leads to over population throughout the world and results to drought for food and other resources.
So
, there will be
a huge damage
to the economy and other species.
In contrast
,
some
people
believe that it is
good
for the
people
if we develop a
technology
which
helps
to extend our
lives
.
For example
, we can spend our time with our great
grandchildren and
we
also
use
new
technology
in the future. Living till the future
makes
a person work less and it can threat to human life. Although we have
lived
for 100 years,
but
nature does no support to these processes and kills
many
people
by disasters
namely
, earthquakes, Tsunami.
In conclusion
, by discussing the both sides of the argument in the above aforementioned points, it is easy to
live
for years by
technology
but
it creates
many
problems and imbalance in nature. In my humble opinion, Everyone should spend their life
naturally
without the
use
of science and
many
great scientists,
people
should
live
for years
because
of their research and new inventions.
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