Science will soon make people live up to 100 years or even 200 years. Some believe this is a good thing while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion. v.1
Science will soon make people live up to 100 years or even 200 years. Some believe this is a good thing while others disagree. v. 1
Aging in recent years has become very debatable. Many individuals share the view that new scientific innovations will enable humans live up to about 100 to 200 years on earth, making this beneficial because, this will enable them live longer with their family members, however, I strongly disagree with this view because, this would not only increase the world’ population but also increase environmental pollution. This essay will discuss both views in length.
The major reason why individuals share the opinion that living more years on earth is beneficial is because, this allows longer time with ones family. In other words, the longer humans stay in the world the closer they are to their families. Imagine if you will, this present generation living for more than 10 decades, knowing more than 4 to 5 generations, becoming great great grandparents. Thus, resulting in a community of extended families.
On the contrary, many believe that this is unrealistic mainly because, this would increase population, which in turn increases environmental pollution. This implies that, more citizens will be subjected to the effects of overcrowding such as, spread of airborne diseases. Take for example, the spread of tuberculosis in 1940, in South America, which took about 300, 000 lives. According to Dr Shama Atake, the historian, the spread of this disease was as a result of overcrowding. Hence, innovations to increase life cycle would result in severe environmental damage.
In conclusion, scientific developments would rather than, benefit the community, cause more damage to not only the society but also the health of the citizens within the society.
Aging in recent years has become
very
debatable.
Many
individuals share the view that new scientific innovations will enable humans
live
up to about 100 to 200 years on earth, making this beneficial
because
, this will enable them
live
longer with their family members,
however
, I
strongly
disagree with this view
because
, this would not
only
increase
the world’ population
but
also
increase
environmental pollution. This essay will discuss both views in length.
The major reason why individuals share the opinion that living more years on earth is beneficial is
because
, this
allows
longer time with
ones
family.
In other words
, the longer humans stay in the world the closer they are to their families. Imagine if you will, this present generation living for more than 10 decades, knowing more than 4 to 5 generations, becoming
great great
grandparents.
Thus
, resulting in a community of extended families.
On the contrary
,
many
believe that this is unrealistic
mainly
because
, this would
increase
population, which in turn
increases
environmental pollution.
This implies that
, more citizens will
be subjected
to the effects of overcrowding such as, spread of airborne diseases. Take
for example
, the spread of tuberculosis in 1940, in South America, which took about 300, 000
lives
. According to Dr
Shama
Atake
, the historian, the spread of this disease was
as a result
of overcrowding.
Hence
, innovations to
increase
life cycle would result in severe environmental damage.
In conclusion
, scientific developments would
rather
than, benefit the community, cause more damage to not
only
the society
but
also
the health of the citizens within the society.
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