Educational institutions need to spend money in an effective way, Few individuals say hiring skilled teachers is the best way and a few others say investing on latest technologies like software and automated equipment, Lets articulate both the views in below paragraphs
Quality teaching is dominant in the present education system. Effective teaching can make students knowledgeable. There is a lot of practice that can be done to make students aligned with current trends. for instance, a student is poor in maths or science subject teacher needs to take extra care of him like explaining the content in detail, preparing materials like slide presentations, etc. Good teaching can make the student foundation strong and can become a fruitful achiever. If teachers are paid more salary on their performance basis, they were likely to show more interest
On the other hand, technology growing rapidly in day to day life. With the traditional way of teaching adding technology will boost student's intelligence. for instance, at the school level, computer education can give hands-on programming skills to the student. Conducting online classes can attract students who are not willing to come to school. Teachers can create Microsoft PowerPoint presentation slides which is one of an effective manner of teaching. Nowadays everyone is familiar with YouTube, most of the topics are learning by watching YouTube videos
In conclusion, although hiring highly skilled teachers are considered to be beneficial for the educational system, technology also play a vital role in student life to boost their education I support both views for the benefit of education system.
Educational institutions need to spend money
in an effective way
, Few individuals say hiring skilled
teachers
is the best way and a few others say investing on latest
technologies
like software and automated equipment,
Lets
articulate both the views in below paragraphs
Quality
teaching
is dominant in the present
education
system. Effective
teaching
can
make
students
knowledgeable. There is
a lot of
practice that can
be done
to
make
students
aligned with
current
trends.
for
instance, a
student
is poor in
maths
or science subject
teacher
needs to take extra care of him like explaining the content in detail, preparing materials like slide presentations, etc.
Good
teaching
can
make
the
student
foundation strong and can become a fruitful achiever. If
teachers
are paid
more salary on their performance basis, they were likely to
show
more
interest
On the other hand
,
technology
growing
rapidly
in day to day life. With the traditional way of
teaching
adding
technology
will boost student's intelligence.
for
instance, at the school level, computer
education
can give hands-on programming
skills
to the
student
. Conducting online classes can attract
students
who are not willing to
come
to school.
Teachers
can create Microsoft PowerPoint presentation slides which is one of an effective manner of
teaching
. Nowadays everyone is familiar with YouTube, most of the topics are learning by watching YouTube
videos
In conclusion
, although hiring
highly
skilled
teachers
are considered
to be beneficial for the educational system,
technology
also
play a vital role in
student
life to boost their
education
I support both views for the benefit of
education
system.
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