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School children are becoming far too dependent on computers. This is having an alarming effect on reading and writing skills. Teachers need to avoid using computers in the classroom at all costs and go back to teaching basic study skills. Do you agree or disagree? v.1

School children are becoming far too dependent on computers. This is having an alarming effect on reading and writing skills. Teachers need to avoid using computers in the classroom at all costs and go back to teaching basic study skills. v. 1
Some people think that school children are completely dependent on the computers and teachers should avoid using LCD screens for teaching. While others that it's actually good to learn everything over the computer. However, In my view, I completely disagree to switch back to normal teaching methodologies. Firstly, the predominant reason by using the digital screens is lectures can save a lot of paper for various purposes. With that initiation we are saving our ecosystem, eventually people can save more tree for the paper. For instance, conducting exams for students over online, we do not require any paperwork. Additionally, It will not impact on the student's reading and writing skills rather it will boost their career excel in future since everyone upgrading to online. In most of tech companies everything will run on computers, they hardly use the papers, books and other paper-based materials. Secondly, for the students reading and writing on digital screens are more comfortable. They will not get hurt with ball pens to write down a vast number of pages and especially for reading everything will be visible over the screen. They do not require to turn the pages unlike the book based reading style. For example, consider reading a book over the large screen will save a lot of time and their efforts. In our digital era, everything getting converted into online so it's time to shift the students towards the digital screens with the advanced teaching methods. To conclude, using the digital displays not only improve the students writing and reading skills but also help in their future growth in the digital world. Also, students will be comfortable over the computers to write and read their academics.
Some
people
think
that school children are completely dependent on the computers and teachers should avoid using LCD
screens
for teaching.
While
others that it's actually
good
to learn
everything
over
the computer.
However
, In my view, I completely disagree to switch back to normal teaching methodologies.

Firstly
, the predominant reason by using the digital
screens
is lectures can save
a lot of
paper for various purposes. With that initiation we are saving our ecosystem,
eventually
people
can save more tree for the paper.
For instance
, conducting exams for
students
over
online, we do not require any paperwork.

Additionally
, It will not impact on the student's
reading
and writing
skills
rather
it will boost their career excel in future since everyone
upgrading
to online.

In
most of tech
companies
everything
will run on computers, they hardly
use
the papers, books and other paper-based materials.

Secondly
, for the
students
reading
and writing on digital
screens
are more comfortable. They will not
get
hurt with ball pens to write down a vast number of pages and
especially
for
reading
everything
will be visible
over
the
screen
. They do not require to turn the pages unlike the book based
reading
style.

For example
, consider
reading
a book
over
the large
screen
will save
a lot of
time and their efforts. In our digital era,
everything
getting converted into online
so
it's time to shift the
students
towards the digital
screens
with the advanced teaching methods.

To conclude
, using the digital displays not
only
improve
the
students
writing and
reading
skills
but
also
help
in their future growth in the digital world.

Also
,
students
will be comfortable
over
the computers to write and read their academics.
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IELTS essay School children are becoming far too dependent on computers. This is having an alarming effect on reading and writing skills. Teachers need to avoid using computers in the classroom at all costs and go back to teaching basic study skills. v. 1

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282 words
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