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Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Comments about the task: 1. An opinion essay 2. You must say how much you agree or disagree Totally agree 1. Corruption 2. Bad economic policies Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. v.14

Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. Comments about the task: 1. An opinion essay 2. You must say how much you agree or disagree Totally agree 1. Corruption 2. Bad economic policies v. 14
A growing number of students choose to earn their tertiary education outside their countries in different universities worldwide. learning to be independent and explore new horizon are some benefits which they can get from this experience while there are some minor disadvantages can be considered and I think that benefits are greater than demerits. Firstly, studying in a different country is a great experience as the student can depend on him or herself away from their parents in all their daily activities, studying, eating and managing time and money properly because they are alone and have to trust themselves, grow up to be adults and achieve their future goals. Secondly, travelling to continue studying in foreign countries teach them new languages, cultures and visit new historical places. In the UK, for example, there are around 100, 000 students from many countries who are graduating every year in many colleges with excellent grades. In spite of the former advantageous impacts, still there are negative points to be discussed, homesickness is affecting a group of students preventing them from studying properly because of spending time thinking of their parents, their homes and friends. Also language barrier is an obstacle affects some students as they cannot manage to react with their colleagues, order foods, or using public transport. For instance, around 20 per cent of foreign students in Oxford university return their home countries in the first year because they cannot adapt to live in another country away from home. In conclusion, the major positive effect of studying abroad outweighs any negative impacts like homesickness and language barriers.
A growing number of
students
choose to earn their tertiary education outside their
countries
in
different
universities worldwide.
learning
to be independent and explore new horizon are
some
benefits which they can
get
from this experience while there are
some
minor disadvantages can
be considered
and I
think
that benefits are greater than demerits.

Firstly
,
studying
in a
different
country
is a great experience as the
student
can depend on him or herself away from their parents in all their daily activities,
studying
, eating and managing time and money
properly
because
they are alone and
have to
trust themselves, grow up to be adults and achieve their future goals.
Secondly
, travelling to continue
studying
in foreign
countries
teach them new languages, cultures and visit new historical places. In the UK,
for example
, there are around 100, 000
students
from
many
countries
who are graduating every year in
many
colleges with excellent grades.

In spite of
the former advantageous impacts,
still
there are
negative
points to
be discussed
, homesickness is affecting a group of
students
preventing them from
studying
properly
because
of spending time thinking of their parents, their homes and friends.
Also
language barrier is an obstacle affects
some
students
as they cannot manage to react with their colleagues, order foods, or using public transport.
For instance
, around 20 per cent of foreign
students
in Oxford university return their home
countries
in the
first
year
because
they cannot adapt to
live
in another
country
away from home.

In conclusion
, the major
positive
effect of
studying
abroad outweighs any
negative
impacts like homesickness and language barriers.
8Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
17Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes

IELTS essay Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. Comments about the task: 1. An opinion essay 2. You must say how much you agree or disagree Totally agree 1. Corruption 2. Bad economic policies v. 14

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