The role of technology in the world today is widely debated, with some people claiming that modern technology itself could diminish the distance between different workplaces’ locations and main office. It will provide easiness way for workers to share information with employers and colleagues. Personally, I do not feel that only workers obtain benefits from this modernity, and I will explain why in this essay.
Firstly, many companies are facing high competition in the same product market. The managers please hight quality interactive with their colleagues, for instance by sharing data immediately, fast searching and convenience to work outside the office. If all staffs can face together by video conference, they will not necessary to go through the traffic jam in the morning for working. In this case, employers no need to spend high budget for a large workspace and staffs will not suffer from sedentary lifestyle. Finally, computers have the ability to process the statistical data with high accuracy and response time. This is faster than work by man, and prevents the damage from stress which in itself could generate further social problems.
I do appreciate that some people think differently, saying that it is safer to send data in paper form. Because there are many concerns about documents hacking, also data losing when network is down. If the damaged information is secret or important, it would be worse and hard to recover all of them. Nevertheless, There are many feasible ways to establish databases’ security.
In conclusion, I tend to agree that it is wiser to use internet in the company, for reasons which benefit both workers and entrepreneur.
The role of technology in the world
today
is
widely
debated, with
some
people
claiming that modern technology itself could diminish the distance between
different
workplaces’ locations and main office. It will provide easiness way for workers to share information with employers and colleagues.
Personally
, I do not feel that
only
workers obtain benefits from this modernity, and I will
explain
why in this essay.
Firstly
,
many
companies
are facing high competition in the same product market. The managers
please
hight
quality interactive with their colleagues,
for instance
by sharing
data
immediately,
fast
searching and convenience to work outside the office. If all staffs can face together by video conference, they
will not necessary
to go through the traffic jam in the morning for working.
In this case
, employers no need to spend high budget for a large workspace and staffs will not suffer from sedentary lifestyle.
Finally
, computers have the ability to process the statistical
data
with high accuracy and response time. This is faster than work by
man
, and
prevents
the damage from
stress
which in itself could generate
further
social problems.
I do appreciate that
some
people
think
differently
, saying that it is safer to
send
data
in paper form.
Because
there are
many
concerns about documents hacking,
also
data
losing when network is down. If the damaged information is secret or
important
, it would be worse and
hard
to recover all of them.
Nevertheless
, There are
many
feasible ways to establish databases’ security.
In conclusion
, I tend to
agree
that it is wiser to
use
internet in the
company
, for reasons which benefit both workers and entrepreneur.
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