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Many people work from home using modern technology today Some people think that only the workers benefit from this and not employers Do you agree or disagree v.1

Many people work from home using modern technology today Some people think that only the workers benefit from this and not employers v. 1
It is undeniable that news has become an indispensable part of people's lives since long. However, these days news editors have decided the content of the TV and the news that is published in the newspapers. This essay will discuss the factors that are responsible that why news editors select the material for the news and how people are getting influenced from the bad news as well as the importance of telecasting the good news. To begin with, there are several reasons that why most of the news channels tend to choose the particular news and the predominant ones are publicity and money. It is seen that most of the news channels telecasted the news in order to gain people's attention and that is why they opt to publish any news whether it is authentic or not so that they can earn a large amount of money or fame. Indeed, there have been some recorded instances of news reporters, who is broadcasting the fake news without any reliability. Thus, it is totally depends upon the news channels or news editors that which kind of news could be more liked by the public so they can earn more lucrative. Despite this, certainly there is some trending news which are immensely affecting the people and nowadays people could easily trust on any type of news that are published in the news articles or TV without checking the authenticity. In addition, some news has detrimental effects on people, youngsters, particularly as they tried to opt the lifestyle of their favourite celebrities after watching their news. Moreover, it would be beneficial if more and more reliable or authentic news will be telecasted because news are the only source to get familiar with what is happening in the global. For example, these days Corona Virus has become a viral disease all over the world, if news related to its precaution and safety measures will be published, then it will have an immense benefit to the general public. Overall, people are getting indulged with the unreliable new source, but the publication of beneficial news would be worthwhile. In conclusion, news editor publishing the news as per their choice which provides them enormously fame and money, but people are getting addictive of such kind of news so to mitigate the effects of this trend, the news agencies should telecast the true and exact news without editing.
It is undeniable that
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news
has become an indispensable part of
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people
's
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lives
since long.
However
, these days
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news
editors have decided the content of the TV and the
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news
that
is published
in the newspapers. This essay will discuss the factors that are responsible that why
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news
editors select the material for the
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news
and how
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people
are getting influenced from the
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bad
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news
as well
as the importance of telecasting the
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good
news.

To
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begin
with, there are several reasons that why most of the
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news
channels tend to choose the particular
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news
and the predominant ones are publicity and money. It is
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seen
that most of the
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news
channels
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telecasted
the
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news
in order to gain
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people
's attention and
that is
why they opt to publish any
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news
whether it is authentic or not
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so
that they can earn a large amount of money or fame.
Indeed
, there have been
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some
recorded instances of
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news
reporters, who is broadcasting the fake
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news
without any reliability.
Thus
, it is
totally
depends upon the
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news
channels or
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news
editors that which kind of
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news
could be more liked by the public
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so
they can earn more lucrative.

Despite this,
certainly
there is
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some
trending
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news
which are
immensely
affecting the
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people
and nowadays
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people
could
easily
trust on any type of
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news
that
are published
in the
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news
articles or TV without checking the authenticity.
In addition
,
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some
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news
has detrimental effects on
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people
, youngsters,
particularly
as they tried to opt the lifestyle of their
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favourite
celebrities after watching their
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news
.
Moreover
, it would be beneficial if more and more reliable or authentic
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news
will be
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telecasted
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because
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news
are the
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only
source to
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get
familiar with what is happening in the global.
For example
, these days
The term "Coronavirus" (= disease) is spelled as one word.
Corona Virus
has become a viral disease all over the world, if
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news
related to its precaution and safety measures will
be published
, then it will have an immense benefit to the
Consider using "public".
general public
.
Overall
,
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people
are getting indulged with the unreliable
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new
source,
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but
the publication of beneficial
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news
would be worthwhile.

In conclusion
,
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news
editor publishing the
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news
as per their choice which provides them
enormously
fame and money,
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but
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people
are getting addictive of such kind of
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news
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so
to mitigate the effects of this trend, the
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news
agencies should telecast the true and exact
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news
without editing.
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7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes
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IELTS essay Many people work from home using modern technology today Some people think that only the workers benefit from this and not employers v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
399 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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