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Question: What is a very important skill a person should learn in order to be successful in the world today? Choose one skill and use specific reasons and examples to support your choice. v.2

Question: What is a very important skill a person should learn in order to be successful in the world today? Choose one skill and use specific reasons and examples to support your choice. v. 2
Considering a really important skill that should be learned to be successful in the world, the answer is tightly depends on the different variety such as the person capability, fondness, and the economical condition of the country. It is obvious that any suggestion without considering the person fondness is a wrong decision. Based on the economical conditions of my country, however, I am highly inclined to take the side of learning a new international language as a categorical skill to be succeeded. To elaborate more on the topic mentioned, the following reasons and examples will be presented. First and foremost, considering the economical prosperous as one of the success definition, the importance of a new international language to communicate with others country to acquire the new opportunities is crucial. Needless to say, the powerful communication in economic competition plays a key role to convince the customers. For example, if a person tend to commercialize a new product in a foreign country, the appropriate communication illustrating the perfect quality is indicated as the first step. Moreover, in the huge and complicated commercial company, be professional in a new language to make a suitable contract among partnerships with different native languages is substantial subject. It goes without saying, if persons are professional in that skill (i. e communicate with another international language), they undoubtedly be successful when it comes in their future jobs. Another primary reason can be attributed to the requirement of another international language to be admitted for other universities in the world. For instance, if a person from France desires to apply for the United States universities, they absolutely need to improve their English skills. Besides, in travelling abroad, the profession in another international language is implied as necessity subject. It is crystal clear that the key characteristic of tour leaders in addition to their introduction with foreign cultures is effective communication via another language. Taking all these perspectives into account, I cannot agree more about learning a new international language as a dramatic skill to be succeeded regarding the economical opportunities and effective communication. Although, learning a new international language is consider as significant subject, the importance of the person capability should not be neglected.
Considering a
really
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important
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skill
that should
be learned
to be successful in the world, the answer is
tightly
depends on the
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different
variety such as the
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person
capability, fondness, and the
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economical
condition of the
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country
. It is obvious that any suggestion without considering the
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person
fondness is a
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wrong
decision. Based on the
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economical
conditions of my
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country
,
however
, I am
highly
inclined to take the side of learning a
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new
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international
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language
as a categorical
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skill
to
be succeeded
. To elaborate more on the topic mentioned, the following reasons and examples will
be presented
.

First
and foremost, considering the
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economical
prosperous as one of the success definition, the importance of a
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new
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international
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language
to communicate with others
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country
to acquire the
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new
opportunities is crucial. Needless to say, the powerful
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communication
in economic competition plays a key role to convince the customers.
For example
, if a
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person
tend to commercialize a
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new
product in a foreign
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country
, the appropriate
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communication
illustrating the perfect quality
is indicated
as the
first
step.
Moreover
, in the huge and complicated commercial
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company
, be professional in a
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new
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language
to
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make
a suitable contract among partnerships with
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different
native
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languages
is substantial subject. It goes without saying, if
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persons
are professional in that
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skill
(i. e communicate with another
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international
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language)
, they
undoubtedly
be successful when it
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comes in
their future jobs.

Another primary reason can
be attributed
to the requirement of another
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international
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language
to
be admitted
for other universities in the world.
For instance
, if a
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person
from France desires to apply for the United States universities, they
absolutely
need to
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improve
their English
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skills
.
Besides
, in travelling abroad, the profession in another
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international
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language
is implied
as necessity subject. It is crystal
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clear
that the key characteristic of tour leaders
in addition
to their introduction with foreign cultures is effective
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communication
via another language.

Taking all these perspectives into account, I cannot
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agree
more about learning a
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new
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international
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language
as a dramatic
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skill
to
be succeeded
regarding the
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economical
opportunities and effective
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communication
. Although, learning a
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new
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international
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language
is
Consider using a past participle here: "considered".
consider
as significant subject, the importance of the
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person
capability should not
be neglected
.
9Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
46Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes

IELTS essay Question: What is a very important skill a person should learn in order to be successful in the world today? Choose one skill and use specific reasons and examples to support your choice. v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
367 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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  • Doesn't meet the criteria
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