It is inevitable that our world has changed to become a very high competition. Living in the modern world, a person needs to be able to compete with others for getting a better opportunity. Some people assert that the value of cooperation should be expressed in children which can help them to learn how to work with others. This is an interesting issue that needs to be considered carefully.
On the one hand, there are many merits of participating in different sort of competitions. Firstly, the competitions can help a child to be more self-confident. A child has to build their strength and prepare yourself to be ready for a competition. With the confidence and brave, a child will be able to competitive others and achieve their goal. Secondly, the competitions can boost up the talents and strength. Children have to practice regular for building their skills. The difference of competitive levels provides a chance to develop advanced skills. Lacking of endeavor and enough practice, a child will not be able to build their skills and cannot get in a higher level. Lastly, children can put their effort to face in the challenging situation. They have to face with a high pressure from other people around the competition.
On the other hand, the value of collaborative work is overestimated. The cooperation is very essential to work with others. The ability of communication or accept other perspective while working in a team will help a child development. A child has to learn how to discuss and debate some ideas with others. If he/she does not agree with others, he/she has to adjust how to talk with co-workers. They also have to open their mind for adjusting and accepting other attitudes when most people agree that. As a result, they will become a good follower as well as a goo leader.
In conclusion, in my perspective, I do believe that both sides carry some weights which are right both. Even though, the completion has many benefits to a child, the sense of harmonious relationship in teamwork is also important for the development of children. Therefore, both approaches should properly balance in a child development.
It is inevitable that our world has
changed
to become a
very
high
competition
. Living in the modern world, a person needs to be able to compete with others for getting a better opportunity.
Some
people
assert that the value of cooperation should
be expressed
in
children
which can
help
them to learn how to work with others. This is an interesting issue that needs to
be considered
carefully
.
On the one hand, there are
many
merits of participating in
different
sort of
competitions
.
Firstly
, the
competitions
can
help
a
child
to be more self-confident. A
child
has to
build their strength and prepare yourself to be ready for a
competition
. With the confidence and brave, a
child
will be able to competitive others and achieve their goal.
Secondly
, the
competitions
can boost up the talents and strength.
Children
have to
practice regular for building their
skills
. The difference of competitive levels provides a chance to develop advanced
skills
. Lacking of endeavor and
enough
practice, a
child
will not be able to build their
skills
and cannot
get
in a higher level.
Lastly
,
children
can put their effort to face in the challenging situation. They
have to
face with a high pressure from
other
people
around the competition.
On the
other
hand, the value of collaborative work
is overestimated
. The cooperation is
very
essential to work with others. The ability of communication or accept
other
perspective while working in a team will
help
a
child
development. A
child
has to
learn how to discuss and debate
some
ideas
with others. If he/she does not
agree
with others, he/she
has to
adjust how to talk with co-workers. They
also
have to
open their mind for adjusting and accepting
other
attitudes when most
people
agree
that.
As a result
, they will become a
good
follower
as well
as a goo leader.
In conclusion
, in my perspective, I do believe that both sides carry
some
weights which are right both.
Even though
, the completion has
many
benefits to a
child
, the sense of harmonious relationship in teamwork is
also
important
for the development of
children
.
Therefore
, both approaches should
properly
balance in a
child
development.