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t has been said, “Not everything that is learned is contained in books. ” Compare and contrast knowledge gained from experience with knowledge gained from books. In your opinion, which source is more important? Why? Use specifc reasons and examples to v.2

t has been said, “Not everything that is learned is contained in books. ” Compare and contrast knowledge gained from experience with knowledge gained from books. In your opinion, which source is more important? Why? Use specifc reasons and examples to v. 2
It is said that more you share your knowledge, the more it grows. For us, we can gain knowledge from various sources; for example reading books, working manulally on the projects, looking up on internet and the list goes on. It is not such that doing only one of them will help you to be a savant. For a person to be well versed with topics all aorund the world, be eclectic, he must be not only reading but also practicing it, sharing it with fellow collegues, applying it in day to day life. Yes, to some extent books are important for us to gain knowledge, but we should not be limited to it. There may be various topics within book which can be difficult and for that purpose we should use the resources at our disposal. For example, a student of non-native english language is reading a novel and comes up with a word which he finds difficult to understand, then in such case, he should be looking up for the menaing of word, be it from dictionary, from internet, or ask anyone who may know the meaning. Then comes area where reading from books would definitely will not be enough. Many professional courses reuqires students to do certain amount of lab work prior to being given a graduate degree. Professional degrees related to medical sciences, engineering, cooking, designing and many more require you to spend some lab hours, perform some experiments and then only are they allowed to work on real life problems. As for professional degree, I would here like to give an instance where I was supposed to deliver a presentation on flow of fluid around an aerodynamic body, for which I was supposed to prepare. I could not prepare enough, and it should have been difficult for me to deliver the presentation. But, being well versed with the topic as I had worked on it as a part of my research project, I came up with a presentation for which was acclaimed to be the best presentation of the day. From the beginning of our life only, as a baby we are taught to do things and we as a child are not supposed to read books for that, we practice those things. Eating, walking, talking, and many day to day activities, we do are not the ones we have read and learnt, rather it is a reuslt of constant practice over the years. The world is constanlty changing and it reuires one to be well informed of the topics to stand out in a crowd. It may be such that reading a book will help you, be enough for you, but little more knowledge will definitely not harm you. Thus in conclusion, I would like to agree with the statement that " Not everything that is learned is contained in the books. "
It
is said
that more you share your
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knowledge
, the more it grows. For us, we can gain
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knowledge
from various sources;
for example
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reading
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books
, working
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manulally
on the projects, looking up on internet and the list goes on. It is not such that doing
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only
one of them will
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help
you to be a savant. For a person to be well versed with
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topics
all
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aorund
the world, be eclectic, he
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must
be not
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only
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reading
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but
also
practicing it, sharing it with fellow
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collegues
, applying it in day to day life.

Yes, to
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some
extent
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books
are
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important
for us to gain
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knowledge
,
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but
we should not
be limited
to it. There may be various
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topics
within
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book
which can be difficult and for that purpose we should
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use
the resources at our disposal.
For example
, a student of non-native
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english
language is
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reading
a novel and
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comes
up with a word which he finds difficult to understand, then in such case, he should be looking up for the
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menaing
of word, be it from dictionary, from internet, or ask anyone who may know the meaning. Then
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comes
area where
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reading
from
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books
would definitely will not be
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enough
.
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Many
professional courses
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reuqires
students to do certain amount of lab work prior to being
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given
a graduate degree. Professional degrees related to medical sciences, engineering, cooking, designing and
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many
more require you to spend
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some
lab hours, perform
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some
experiments and then
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only
are they
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allowed
to work on real life problems. As for professional degree, I would here like to give an instance where I
was supposed
to deliver a
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presentation
on flow of fluid around an aerodynamic body, for which I
was supposed
to prepare. I could not prepare
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
enough
, and it should have been difficult for me to deliver the
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presentation
.
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But
, being well versed with the
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topic
as I had worked on it as a part of my research project, I came up with a
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presentation
for which
was acclaimed
to be the best
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presentation
of the day.

From the beginning of our life
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only
, as a baby we
are taught
to do
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things and
we as a child are not supposed to read
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books
for that, we practice those things. Eating, walking, talking, and
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many day
to day activities, we do are not the ones we have read and
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learnt
,
rather
it is a
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reuslt
of constant practice over the years. The world is
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constanlty
changing and it
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reuires
one to be
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well informed
of the
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topics
to stand out in a crowd. It may be such that
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reading
a
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book
will
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help
you, be
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enough
for you,
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but
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little
more
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knowledge
will definitely not harm you.
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Thus
in conclusion
, I would like to
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agree
with the statement that
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&quot
; Not everything that
is learned
is contained
in the
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books
.
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&quot
;
8Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
28Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
16Mistakes
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IELTS essay t has been said, “Not everything that is learned is contained in books. ” Compare and contrast knowledge gained from experience with knowledge gained from books. In your opinion, which source is more important? Why? Use specifc reasons and examples to v. 2

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
479 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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