Question: Some people believe that the Earth is being harmed (damaged) by human activity. Others feel that human activity makes the Earth a better place to live. What is your opinion? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. v.2
Question: Some people believe that the Earth is being harmed (damaged) by human activity. Others feel that human activity makes the Earth a better place to live. What is your opinion? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. v. 2
Our planet Earth is where we live and spend all of our lives. So, it is important to protect Earth. Even though some people belive that human activities damage Earth, some disagree. In my opinion, human activities makes the Earth a better place to live for two main reasons.
First, without humans, Earth is just a planet like other planets. Our planet does not have identity without people who are living in. In addition, there are so many places on Earth that does not have enough resources for humans and other creatures. Therefore, without humans those areas can be considered dead. Last week, when I was reading a newspaper, I read about a two-year-old child who was starving to death in Nigeria. Her family were not able to afford buying food. She was suffering from malnutrition. Finally, a charity in United States that supports children' s life in Africa, found her and started supporting her. The charity not only did start supporting her financially, but also it helped her family to grow some potato in the fields close by their shack. After few weeks, she started growing and her health was improved significantly. Furthermore, the potatoes started growing which offered another source of nutrition for her and her family. As you can see clearly, without human activities she would have lost her life.
Second, humans help with saving many endangered animals. During years, Earth might encounter natural climate changes and disasters such as earthquakes and flood. In my country, Iran, there is a special type of cheetah that was in danger of extincting around 15 years ago. The extiction had started because of flooding Caspian Sea to the north land of Iran, the habitat of Iranian Cheetah. Enviromentalist and other scientists had a series of meetings on how to save this animal. After several discussions and meetings, they concluded that they need to transfer about 100 of these animals to a non-exhibiting zoo where they can live naturally and safely. This example clearly illustrates that humans made Earth a better place by saving its species.
In conclusion, I belive that humans makes the Earth an amazing place to live not only by saving humans but also by saving endangered animals. I recommend people who disagree with this statement to reconsider their point of view.
Our
planet
Earth
is where we
live
and spend all of our
lives
.
So
, it is
important
to protect
Earth
.
Even though
some
people
belive
that
human
activities damage
Earth
,
some
disagree. In my opinion,
human
activities
makes
the
Earth
a better
place
to
live
for two main reasons.
First
, without
humans
,
Earth
is
just
a
planet
like other
planets
. Our
planet
does not have identity without
people
who are living in.
In addition
, there are
so
many
places
on
Earth
that does not have
enough
resources for
humans
and other creatures.
Therefore
, without
humans
those areas can
be considered
dead. Last week, when I was reading a newspaper, I read about a two-year-
old
child who was starving to death in Nigeria. Her family were not able to afford
buying
food. She was suffering from malnutrition.
Finally
, a charity
in United States
that supports
children&
#039; s life in Africa, found her and
started
supporting her. The charity not
only
did
start
supporting her
financially
,
but
also
it
helped
her family to grow
some
potato in the fields close by their shack. After few weeks, she
started
growing and her health was
improved
significantly
.
Furthermore
, the potatoes
started
growing which offered another source of nutrition for her and her family. As you can
see
clearly
, without
human
activities she would have lost her life.
Second,
humans
help
with
saving
many
endangered
animals
. During years,
Earth
might encounter natural climate
changes
and disasters such as earthquakes and flood. In my country, Iran, there is a special type of cheetah that was in
danger
of extincting around 15 years ago. The
extiction
had
started
because
of flooding Caspian Sea to the north land of Iran, the habitat of Iranian Cheetah.
Enviromentalist
and other scientists had a series of meetings on how to save this
animal
. After several discussions and meetings, they concluded that they need to transfer about 100 of these
animals
to a non-exhibiting zoo where they can
live
naturally
and
safely
. This example
clearly
illustrates that
humans
made
Earth
a better
place
by
saving
its species.
In conclusion
,
I belive
that
humans
makes
the
Earth
an amazing
place
to
live
not
only
by
saving
humans
but
also
by
saving
endangered
animals
. I recommend
people
who disagree with this statement to reconsider their point of view.
15Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
44Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes