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Question: Neighbors are the people who live near us. In your opinion, what are the qualities of a good neighbor? Use specific details and examples in your answer. v.2

Question: Neighbors are the people who live near us. In your opinion, what are the qualities of a good neighbor? Use specific details and examples in your answer. v. 2
Neighbors are very important part of our lives. We spend most of our lives at the same neighborhood with our neighbors. The impact they can place in our lives can be huge. They can cause us so many problems or they can actually help us in difficulties. So, it is really important that our neighbors have specific qualities. Even though some people might not care for their neighbors' personality. Some might do. In my view, a good neighbor should be trustworthy and sociable for the following two reasons. First, neighbors should be trustworthy. Being around people that we can trust would make us feel safe. It is important not to be stressed by the thought of being rubbed or stolen by your neighbors. For example, I live in a very safe neighborhood in Dallas, TX. My husband has been living in this area for about seven years. So, he knows everyone and all of our neighbors trust and respect him. I remember when we started dating around two years ago, one of our neighbors who lives across the street asked him to watch her kids for couple hours. My experience with American culture proved that people will never allow you to baby-sit their child unless otherwise they know you very well. On the other side, we also trust them. Two of our neighbors have our house key. Whenever we travel, they come by in the morning and take care of our dogs such as letting them out and feeding them. Also, if it rains, they put our dogs in their kennels. The second characteristic of a neighbor, which is really crucial, is being a sociable person. I remember when I was 8-year-old, my family and I used to live in a neighborhood that we barely knew our neighbors. In big cities such Tehran, people do not have much time to get to know each other. I remember seeing my neighbors in a shopping mall and not even greeting with them. They were like strangers to us. Not being sociable made our lives very difficult. Since we could not make some decisions. For instance, our next door neighbor owned a very famous factory and they were socially reserved. Once when their whole family were praying in the morning, someone broke into their house and stole all of their precious Persian rugs. They were so heratbroken that they wanted to do something about it. They talked to my dad about having a security person for the whole neighborhood. Their wish never came true because no one knew them, so they did not want to make any effort. If they were more sociable, they could attract more people' s attention toward their problem. Maybe our neighbors would have cared more about them if they were introduced or invited to their house. This experience taught me that having more sociable neighbors can be extremly helpful and being reserved or introverted can be harmful. In conclusion, neighbors should be trustworthy and sociable. Having trustworthy neighbors can make our lives easier by not having stress. Also, sociable neighbors can assist themselves and the neighborhood in case of emergency as I mentioned above. As a neighbor, I recommend every single person to have both of those characteristics.
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part of our
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. We spend most of our
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at the same
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with our
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. The impact they can place in our
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lives
can be huge. They can cause us
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problems or
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us in difficulties.
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have specific qualities.
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might do. In my view, a
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good
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should be
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trustworthy
and
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sociable
for the following two reasons.

First
,
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neighbors
should be
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trustworthy
. Being around
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people
that we can trust would
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make
us feel safe. It is
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important
not to be
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stressed
by the
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thought
of
being rubbed
or stolen by your
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neighbors
.
For example
, I
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live
in a
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very
safe
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neighborhood
in Dallas, TX. My husband has been living in this area for about seven years.
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So
, he knows everyone and all of our
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neighbors
trust and respect him. I remember when we
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started
dating around two years ago, one of our
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who
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lives
across the street asked him to
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watch
her kids for couple hours. My experience with American culture proved that
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people
will never
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allow
you to baby-sit their child unless
otherwise
they know you
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very
well. On the other side, we
also
trust them. Two of our
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neighbors
have our
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house
key. Whenever we travel, they
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come
by in the morning and take care of our dogs such as letting them out and feeding them.
Also
, if it rains, they put our dogs in their kennels.

The second characteristic of a
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neighbor
, which is
really
crucial, is being a
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sociable
person. I remember when I was 8-year-
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old
, my family and I
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used
to
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live
in a
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neighborhood
that we
barely
knew our
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neighbors
. In
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big
cities such Tehran,
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people
do not have much time to
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get
to know each other. I remember seeing my
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neighbors
in a shopping mall and not even greeting with them. They were like strangers to us. Not being
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sociable
made our
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lives
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very
difficult.
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Since
we could not
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make
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some
decisions.
For instance
, our
next
door
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neighbor
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owned
a
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very
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famous
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factory and
they were
socially
reserved. Once when their whole family were praying in the morning, someone broke into their
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house
and stole all of their precious Persian rugs. They were
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so
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heratbroken
that they wanted to do something about it. They talked to my dad about
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having
a security person for the whole
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neighborhood
. Their wish never came true
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because
no one knew them,
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so
they did not want to
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make
any effort. If they were more
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sociable
, they could attract more
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people&
#039; s attention toward their problem. Maybe our
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neighbors
would have cared more about them if they
were introduced
or invited to their
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house
. This experience taught me that
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having
more
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sociable
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neighbors
can be
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extremly
helpful and
being reserved
or introverted can be harmful.

In conclusion
,
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neighbors
should be
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trustworthy
and
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sociable
.
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Having
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trustworthy
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neighbors
can
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make
our
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lives
easier by not
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having
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stress
.
Also
,
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sociable
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neighbors
can assist themselves and the
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neighborhood
in case of emergency as I mentioned above. As a
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neighbor
, I recommend every single person to have both of those characteristics.
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IELTS essay Question: Neighbors are the people who live near us. In your opinion, what are the qualities of a good neighbor? Use specific details and examples in your answer. v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
540 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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