Do you agree or disagree with the following: young people nowadays do not give enough time to help the community. v.2
with the following: young people nowadays do not give enough time to help the community. v. 2
Each community has its own needs. As citizens, we all should get together to help our society to bloom. Inviting young people in the participation of the improvement of our community is an important aspect. Some people believe that youths, nowadays, are engaged in helping our community. Others disagree. In my personal view, I believe that young people are not helping enough our community for many reasons.
First of all, parents may influence how their kids become in the future. They play a tremendous role of engaging their kids in the community. Nowadays, everybody is busy in doing something. Many children, since a very young age, are exposed to technological gadgets like Tablets and iPads, and all what they think is how to spend a good time. Parents, unfortunately, are encouraging this behavior and they don' t see the future consequences of the overuse of these items. Kids learn how to not deal with the reality and grow up with " I don' t care" attitude. For example, as a teacher in a preschool, I can see kids every day caring less about what they should do, like to put their toys away after they are done or to organize their books or any material that they used, because simply, they reflect what, in their houses, are use to do. Moreover, it seems that parents are not putting much effort instilling responsibility in their kids. , therefore, those kids will grow up without caring about their communities if they don' t even care about helping their parents at home, how can we expect from them to be involved in helping our society.
Second, the grow of careless feeling decrease the willing to help. Furthermore, " I don' t care" attitude has a negative impact on willingness to help those who are in need. For instance, every day we are confronted in social media, or television, to horrific images, showing consequences of wars and disasters. Every day people are killed or injured and we get further and further desensitized to these kinds of pictures, it becomes something normal to see. Besides that, we see homeless everywhere, they may be sleeping outside in freezing weather and many people will pass by without intervening because simply people don' t care anymore about others pain, we are very consumed by our own problems and lives as a result, young people will copy what adults are doing, they learn from us, and, indeed, some of us are bad example. we influence young people' s behavior to not help our community and not be engaged that much.
In sum, young people are not helping their community not just because they don' t have time but because they are not interested to do so. Also, we all should review our behavior and the way how we raise our kids to have responsible human beings.
Each
community
has its
own
needs. As citizens, we all should
get
together to
help
our society to bloom. Inviting
young
people
in the participation of the improvement of our
community
is an
important
aspect.
Some
people
believe that youths, nowadays,
are engaged
in helping our
community
. Others disagree. In my personal view, I believe that
young
people
are not helping
enough
our
community
for
many
reasons.
First of all
,
parents
may influence how their
kids
become in the future. They play a tremendous role of engaging their
kids
in the
community
. Nowadays, everybody is busy in doing something.
Many
children, since a
very
young
age,
are exposed
to technological gadgets like Tablets and iPads, and all what they
think
is how to spend a
good
time.
Parents
, unfortunately, are encouraging this
behavior and
they
don&
#039; t
see
the future consequences of the overuse of these items.
Kids
learn how to not deal with the reality and grow up with
"
; I
don&
#039; t
care"
; attitude.
For example
, as a teacher in a preschool, I can
see
kids
every day caring less about what they should do, like to put their toys away after they
are done
or to organize their books or any material that they
used
,
because
simply
, they reflect what, in their
houses
, are
use to
do.
Moreover
, it seems that
parents
are not putting much effort instilling responsibility in their
kids
.
,
therefore
, those
kids
will grow up without caring about their
communities
if they
don&
#039; t even care about helping their
parents
at home, how can we
expect
from them to
be involved
in helping our society.
Second, the
grow
of careless feeling decrease the willing to
help
.
Furthermore
,
"
; I
don&
#039; t
care"
; attitude has a
negative
impact on willingness to
help
those who are in need.
For instance
, every day we
are confronted
in social media, or television, to horrific images, showing consequences of wars and disasters. Every day
people
are killed
or
injured and
we
get
further
and
further
desensitized to these kinds of pictures, it becomes something normal to
see
.
Besides
that, we
see
homeless everywhere, they may be sleeping outside in freezing weather and
many
people
will pass by without intervening
because
simply
people
don&
#039; t care
anymore
about others pain, we are
very
consumed by our
own
problems and
lives
as a result
,
young
people
will copy what adults are doing, they learn from us, and,
indeed
,
some
of us are
bad
example.
we
influence
young
people&
#039; s behavior to not
help
our
community
and not
be engaged
that much.
In sum,
young
people
are not helping their
community
not
just
because
they
don&
#039; t have time
but
because
they are not interested to do
so
.
Also
, we all should review our behavior and the way how we raise our
kids
to have responsible human beings.
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