Neighbors are the people who live near us. In your opinion, what are the qualities of a good neighbor? Use specific details and examples in your answer. v.1
Neighbors are the people who live near us. In your opinion, what are the qualities of a good neighbor? Use specific details and examples in your answer. v. 1
In the last years, there has been an increase in the number of fresh graduated students facing unemployment, due to several reasons, such as courses popularity, university failure in adapting the courses in the existing world and others. Considering the many reasons that will be presented, would it be possible to overcome what is happening?
The main reason is that there has been a growth in the quantity of students applying to university. As the schools have more income if they have more students, they just open more positions in the several courses. Thus, in the subjects that are facing popularity because of the ratio of employment, they even open more places. This results in having more graduating students finishing the courses, which leads to less jobs in the end.
Another reason is that courses aren’t updated. As the world evolves, universities should be able to do so, instead they continue giving the subjects as they gave 20 years ago. Likewise, this creates the need for people get extra degrees or extra courses outside the chosen area. Besides this, there are many areas that don’t have any prospects of having a job and they are still being offered by schools.
However, there may be a way to solve the problems presented. Firstly, universities should update what they offer, while having in consideration where the world stands right now. Additionally, they shouldn’t open places for more students that there is a need to, so they should restrict this at the same time that they take into account what the market is looking for.
In conclusion, there are many ways to overcome what is happening now, but to do so, there should be an effort from everyone, especially schools, to solve this.
In the last years, there has been an increase in the number of fresh graduated
students
facing unemployment, due to several
reasons
, such as
courses
popularity,
university
failure in adapting the
courses
in the existing world
and others
. Considering the
many
reasons
that will
be presented
, would it be possible to overcome what is happening?
The main
reason
is that there has been a growth in the quantity of
students
applying to
university
. As the schools have more income if they have more
students
, they
just
open more positions in the several
courses
.
Thus
, in the subjects that are facing popularity
because
of the ratio of employment, they even open more places. This results in having more graduating
students
finishing the
courses
, which leads to
less
jobs in the
end
.
Another
reason
is that
courses
aren’t updated. As the world evolves,
universities
should be able to do
so
,
instead
they continue giving the subjects as they gave 20 years ago.
Likewise
, this creates the need for
people
get
extra degrees or extra
courses
outside the chosen area.
Besides
this, there are
many
areas that don’t have any prospects of having a
job and
they are
still
being offered
by schools.
However
, there may be a way to solve the problems presented.
Firstly
,
universities
should update what they offer, while having in consideration where the world stands right
now
.
Additionally
, they shouldn’t open places for more
students
that there is a need to,
so
they should restrict this at the same time that they take into account what the market is looking for.
In conclusion
, there are
many
ways to overcome what is happening
now
,
but
to do
so
, there should be an effort from everyone,
especially
schools, to solve this.
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7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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