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The local newspaper is holding a "best neighbor in the area" competition. Write a letter to the newspaper to recommend your neighbor for this competition. In your letter, - Introduce yourself - Say whom you are recommending - Explain why this neighbor should be the winner of this competition v.1

The local newspaper is holding a "best neighbor in the area" competition. Write a letter to the newspaper to recommend your neighbor for this competition. In your letter, - Introduce yourself - Say whom you are recommending - Explain why this neighbor should be the winner of this competition v. 1
Dear Sir/Madam, My name is Vicky Amin and I am writing this letter to nominate an individual from my vicinity for best neighbour competition. I read the classified in your newspaper and felt my nominee fits the bill perfectly to receive this award. I have been born and brought up in this city and I stay in Rose apartments near the hills. I am a full-time professional working with a management firm as a business analyst. Part time, I work with a local NGO who aims in rescuing abused animals from the locality. I would like to recommend my neighbour Mr. John Smith, who is a banker by profession and social activist by choice. He stays with his family in the same apartment as I and also heads our building committee as a secretary. He is associated with a lot of NGOs in & around the city fighting for multiple social and noble causes. I believe, he is the perfect choice to receive this award as he has undertaken many social activities for the betterment of the city. Firstly, he got a land approved by mayor to build a shelter for abused animals in the outskirts of the city. Secondly, lake restoration was carried out under his vigilance. Thirdly, every weekend he teaches basic education to poor children. Lastly, he was the face of our city magazine "The Westin" in the year 2019, wherein his efforts were recognized by the local council. I hope my nomination is considered as Mr. Smith has been commendable in envisioning overall development of our city. Yours faithfully, Vicky Amin.
Dear Sir/Madam,

My name is Vicky
Amin and
I am writing this letter to nominate an individual from my vicinity for best
neighbour
competition. I read the classified in your newspaper and felt my nominee fits the bill
perfectly
to receive this award.

I have
been born
and brought up in this city and I stay in Rose apartments near the hills.
I
am a full-time professional working with a management firm as a business analyst.
Part time
, I work with a local NGO who aims in rescuing abused animals from the locality.

I would like to recommend my
neighbour
Mr. John Smith, who is a banker by profession and social activist by choice. He stays with his family in the same apartment as I and
also
heads our building committee as a secretary. He
is associated
with
a lot of
NGOs in & around the city fighting for multiple social and noble causes.

I believe, he is the perfect choice to receive this award as he has undertaken
many
social activities for the betterment of the city.
Firstly
, he
got
a land approved by mayor to build a shelter for abused animals in the outskirts of the city.
Secondly
, lake restoration
was carried
out under his vigilance.
Thirdly
, every weekend he teaches basic education to poor children.
Lastly
, he was the face of our city magazine
"
The
Westin
"
in the year 2019, wherein his efforts
were recognized
by the local council.

I hope my nomination
is considered
as Mr. Smith has been commendable in envisioning
overall
development of our city.

Yours
faithfully
,

Vicky
Amin
.
5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
9Mistakes

IELTS essay The local newspaper is holding a "best neighbor in the area" competition. Write a letter to the newspaper to recommend your neighbor for this competition. In your letter, - Introduce yourself - Say whom you are recommending - Explain why this neighbor should be the winner of this competition v. 1

Essay
  American English
8 paragraphs
265 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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