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Question: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Childhood is the happiest time of a person's life. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion. v.2

Question: Childhood is the happiest time of a person's life. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion. v. 2
Advertisement is a process of making people aware of the new products launched in the market. There are tremendous ways which can be used to cast adverts such as using newspaper, television, radios, emails, internet and hoardings. A few individuals opine that people end up buying unnecessary items after watching advertisements; however, others think that it is a good medium to inform people about the products which can ameliorate their life. I fully concur with the latter viewpoint. This essay will demonstrate that people do find commercials useful in purchasing an item they want. It is irrefutable to to say that there are many newly launched products that people might not know without advertisements. These products can work wonders with all human beings. To cite an instance, Many people end up buying fitness equipment after watching a related advert on the television. If they use this properly, this will not only help them reduce their weight but also keep them healthy and fit. Hence, without adverts people will be oblivious of the products that might prove to be very effective for them. The most significant consideration is, adverts play a crucial role in helping people understand the wide range of product available in market. Despite people can be deceived by showing wrong information about the products, it is their duty to do further research before buying an item. As a result of this, they will never buy things that they do not need. People need to have a self-control and should be sensible enough to understand their requirements. As per the survey conducted by 'India Today' in November 2019, people are being vigilant towards the fake adverts and avoid buying the things they do not require. To conclude, adverts guide people to purchase recently introduced products and many products can make their lives better. If people follow the advertisements blindly, they will bear it later. So, care must be taken and proper analysis should be done before buying any product.
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people
aware of the new
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products
launched in the market. There are tremendous ways which can be
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used
to cast adverts such as using newspaper, television, radios, emails, internet and hoardings. A few individuals opine that
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people
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end
up
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buying
unnecessary items after watching
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advertisements
;
however
, others
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think
that it is a
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good
medium to inform
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people
about the
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products
which can ameliorate their life. I
fully
concur with the latter viewpoint. This essay will demonstrate that
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people
do find commercials useful in purchasing an item they want.

It is irrefutable
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to to
say that there are
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many
newly
launched
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products
that
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people
might not know without
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advertisements
. These
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products
can work wonders with all human beings. To cite an instance,
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Many
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people
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end
up
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buying
fitness equipment after watching a related advert on the television. If they
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use
this
properly
, this will not
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only
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help
them
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reduce
their weight
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but
also
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keep
them healthy and fit.
Hence
, without adverts
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people
will be oblivious of the
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products
that might prove to be
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very
effective for them.

The most significant consideration is, adverts play a crucial role in helping
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people
understand the wide range of
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product
available in market. Despite
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people
can
be deceived
by showing
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wrong
information about the
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products
, it is their duty to do
further
research
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before
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buying
an item.
As a result
of this, they will never
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buy
things that they do not need.
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People
need to have a self-control and should be sensible
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enough
to understand their requirements. As per the survey conducted by 'India
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Today
' in November 2019,
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people
are being vigilant towards the fake adverts and avoid
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buying
the things they do not require.

To conclude
, adverts guide
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people
to
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purchase
recently introduced
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products
and
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many
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products
can
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make
their
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lives
better. If
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people
follow the
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advertisements
blindly
, they will bear it later.
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So
, care
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must
be taken
and proper analysis should
be done
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before
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buying
any
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product
.
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7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay Question: Childhood is the happiest time of a person's life. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion. v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
330 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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