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Do you agree or disagree with the statement? Childhood is the happiest time of a person’s life. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion. v.16

Childhood is the happiest time of a person’s life. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion. v. 16
Childhood is very important phase of individuals life and it occupies many years of one’s life. Childhood is never forgettable and it gathers lots of funny memorable events. Some agrees that childhood is the happiest time among all the ages lived in persons life while few disagrees with it as the child is dependent on family. I agree with the statement that childhood is the happiest time of a person’s life and following are the reasons for this standpoint. Childhood excludes responsibilities of life. Child has no fear of daily living like paying house bills, earning money for family, no responsibilities towards any family members like parents do have. Childhood period has got abundant memories with friends and families. Free from responsibility allows person to enjoy best and spend their time in the activities they like. In childhood most of the kid enjoy playing outdoor and indoor games. They keep on thinking about new games which they can play and enjoy. I remember playing badminton in my most of the childhood time. I enjoyed a lot and still I feel happy remembering my time with friends during those days. Childhood can be considered as long vacation of a person’s life as it is free from burden of responsibilities. In childhood elders expect less from child in fact they are always loved by elders around them. Child plays mischiefs without extreme fear of punishment from elders. In childhood period the kid always thinks and does activities far away from adult’s imaginations but occasionally it works with surprising positive outcome. I remember opening locked door with small pin when the door was locked with keys inside the house. During that time, I was trying that accidently but it worked out and door was opened. Elders usually stays liberal towards child and so they are fearless in doing tasks which makes childhood more memorable. Childhood can be viewed as one movie as it has got lots of sweet memories and fun. Child is unaware about importance of money and other worries. So, one should always allow their children to gather sweet memories of childhood with which they can make themselves happy in adulthood by remembering it.
Childhood is
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very
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important
phase of individuals
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life
and it occupies
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many
years of one’s
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life
. Childhood is never forgettable and it gathers lots of
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funny
memorable
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events
.
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Some
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agrees
that childhood is the happiest
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time
among all the ages
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lived
in
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persons
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life
while few disagrees with it as the
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child
is dependent on
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family
. I
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agree
with the statement that childhood is the happiest
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time
of a
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person’s
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life
and following are the reasons for this standpoint.

Childhood excludes responsibilities of
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life
.
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Child
has no fear of daily living like paying
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house
bills, earning money for
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family
, no responsibilities towards any
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family
members like parents do have. Childhood period has
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got
abundant memories with friends and
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families
. Free from responsibility
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allows
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person
to enjoy best and spend their
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time
in the activities they like. In childhood most of the kid enjoy playing outdoor and indoor games. They
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keep
on thinking about new games which they can play and enjoy. I remember playing badminton in my most of the childhood
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time
. I enjoyed a lot and
still
I feel happy remembering my
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time
with friends during those days. Childhood can
be considered
as long vacation of a
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person’s
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life
as it is free from burden of responsibilities.

In childhood
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elders
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expect
less from
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child
in fact they are always
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loved
by
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elders
around them.
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Child
plays
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mischiefs
without extreme fear of punishment from
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elders
. In childhood period the kid always
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thinks
and does activities far away from adult’s imaginations
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but
occasionally
it works with surprising
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positive
outcome. I remember opening locked door with
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small
pin when the door
was locked
with keys inside the
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house
. During that
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time
, I was trying that
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accidently
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but
it worked out and door
was opened
.
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Elders
usually
stays liberal towards
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child and
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so
they are fearless in doing tasks which
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makes
childhood more memorable.

Childhood can
be viewed
as one movie as it has
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got
lots of sweet memories and fun.
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Child
is unaware about importance of money and other worries.
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So
, one should always
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allow
their children to gather sweet memories of childhood with which they can
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make
themselves happy in adulthood by remembering it.
2Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
30Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes
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IELTS essay Childhood is the happiest time of a person’s life. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion. v. 16

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
363 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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